@stayhomejoe So nice to see traditional art, it looks great. I think the children lack some depth compared to the super dimensional environment, so I'd suggestion adding some more depth (more rounded cuffs, stripes, pockets, etc.) and even exaggerate it a bit . The other thing I would suggest is to flip the canvas. Something looks off and I think if you flip the canvas, you'd have a better idea of what that is.
I flipped it and liquified a little bit.
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