26 Jul 2022, 18:21
@KevinTreaccar lol, DOOM.
My Rabbit Road Race WIP
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Think I have this in a good place. Plan to post it in the morning unless someone sees something I have time to fix.
Thank you all for the amazing help.
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This is soooo good! I really like it, very clear story and great prop design! You nailed the expression on point! Well Done!
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@KevinTreaccar What a great story! I hope you have time for my 2 cents:
- Tangent on the back wheel is throwing me off an otherwise lovely composition. If you have time, pushing the back tire inwards a little will I think solidify the silhouette a bit more. See my quick drawover below
- I really want to give the enthusiastic spectator rabbit a race flag to wave. Just for some extra storytelling element.
Other than that, fantastic job!
- Tangent on the back wheel is throwing me off an otherwise lovely composition. If you have time, pushing the back tire inwards a little will I think solidify the silhouette a bit more. See my quick drawover below
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@aurelia Thank you!
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@KevinTreaccar Thank you! Good catch and good solution on that back tire. And I can’t promise a race flag, but a flag with a specific word on it will get across what he’s yelling without a dialog bubble (Don’t worry, I’ll keep it PG-rated).
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Thank you all, again! Time to start packing. Good luck, everyone!
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@KevinTreaccar lol, DOOM.
- 22 days later
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I want to say thank you again to everyone who helped me during July and gave feedback. Your help boosted me to my first Top 16. I’m floored. Thank you so so much.
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@KevinTreaccar You deserve it! You took your work to a new level. It takes dedication to take advice and make adjustments, and I love seeing what comes of people taking suggestions and striving for the most excellent form of what they're capable of.
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@KevinTreaccar Lovely! You had a strong concept in the first place and push that forward with your willingness to seek improvement. Well done
