Creative Composition- 25 Things WIP

tombarrettillo

I vote for X, but with a camera. : )

Tyson Ranes

@tombarrettillo excellent idea
I was struggling trying to imagine what it was that the lil girl could be doing to better tell a story The net made more sense for butterflies and the binoculars more so for something not as close and enclosed. I think the camera concept nails it! I think it's a great concept.

TessaW

Thanks everyone! I tried it with a camera. There were a lot of possibilities when it came to camera types. What do you think?

Tyson Ranes

@tessw you could try one with phone(camera) held a little away from her face (you could then see her expression looking into the screen and her face could be slightly lit from the phone screen)

Will Terry

@tessw Hi Tess,

I'm super late to this thread so take my comments with the whole shaker of salt

I liked this original comp sketch a little better since you utilize the space a little more efficiently. The girl overlaps the tent - perfect! Also in this first one the emphasis is on the salamander. I'd make it even bigger to create a little more depth. Overall I think this is going to be really fun to paint!

Jose Ramos

@tyson-ranes said in Creative Composition- 25 Things WIP:

see her expression looking into the screen and her face could be slightly lit from the phone screen)

I love it!

TessaW

@Will-Terry Wow, thanks for taking the time to help me out- really appreciate it!

Doodleworx

@tessw looking very good! Nice composition!

Chris Perry

Good job on breaking it into value groups.

WithLinesOfInk

I love how this is turning out!