Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    New Portfolio Piece Critique

    Illustration
    8
    34
    11657
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • Ace Connell
      Ace Connell @Rich Green last edited by

      @Rich-Green Good point.Yeah, with all the light behind, it'd be totally blown out and almost all silhouette (why is that such a difficult word to spell?)

      Ace

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
      • Thrace
        Thrace last edited by

        I think I am done with this one.

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
        • Rich Green
          Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

          OK so now that you are done working on this piece - I have to ask the burning story line question I have had. Who is the figure in the castle window???

          www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

          Thrace 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • Thrace
            Thrace @Rich Green last edited by

            @Rich-Green she is the Dragon Queen.

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
            • Lynn Larson
              Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

              Well done Thrace! I really love the colors, and it is just all around beautiful...nice job dear!

              https://instagram.com/lynnlarsonart/
              https://twitter.com/lynnlarsonart

              Thrace 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • Thrace
                Thrace @Lynn Larson last edited by

                @Lynn-Larson gosh, thank you so much for your kind words!!

                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                • Will Terry
                  Will Terry last edited by

                  Hi Thrace, here are a few of my suggestions - nice piece and as always - these are just suggestions 🙂1445342131215-thrace.jpg

                  SVS Instructor
                  http://willterry.com/

                  Thrace Will Terry 2 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 2
                  • Thrace
                    Thrace @Will Terry last edited by

                    @Will-Terry thank you so much for your input!! I will work on your recommendations and I love the bridge that you added!!

                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                    • Will Terry
                      Will Terry @Will Terry last edited by

                      @Will-Terry You're very welcome - I meant to say "parallel" down there on the bottom...also - I would get good bridge reference - my bridge is horrible 🙂

                      SVS Instructor
                      http://willterry.com/

                      Thrace 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                      • Thrace
                        Thrace @Will Terry last edited by

                        @Will-Terry I knew what you meant. I will get a reference but I don't think yours is horrible it gives me a good idea of what to do!! I really do appreciate your taking the time to help me it means so much!!

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                        • First post
                          Last post