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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • rcartwright
      rcartwright last edited by

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      Hi Will hope you can use this

      https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
      https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
      https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
      https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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      • EunJi Jung
        EunJi Jung last edited by EunJi Jung

        I have so many works that need some good advice, but I picked these for now 😃
        It would be so honoured if I get critiqued!

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        0_1516164739032_EUNJI_JUNG_SPREAD_ICB3_WK4-label.jpg

        Eunji Jung

        Illustrator | Designer
        eunjijung.com
        instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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        • Diego_BioSteam
          Diego_BioSteam last edited by Diego_BioSteam

          Cool! Here are two illustrations that I would like some critique if possible. They are not digital, tho.

          The first one was done with the draw 50 things challenge in mind, but I didn't achieve the 50 things. The second one (done after I learned "how to ink" with Jake Parker) is for a story that I am trying to write and illustrate as part of my process of learning and improving. Both are done with watercolour, a bit of acrylic and ink in A3 paper - the second one has gouache on the characters and a bit of white poster colour for the steam vapour.

          0_1516176433894_Zombie Hero - Resized.png

          0_1516176515299_Welcome to the Core - Resized.jpg

          Diego Araujo
          instagram.com/diego_biosteam/

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          • audrey dowling
            audrey dowling last edited by

            Here's mine again 🙂 (bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)
            0_1516182627722_Happy Hatch day sketch 3.jpg

            website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
            twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
            facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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            • Will Terry
              Will Terry last edited by

              Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!

              I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.

              SVS Instructor
              http://willterry.com/

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              • Will Terry
                Will Terry @audrey dowling last edited by

                @audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!

                SVS Instructor
                http://willterry.com/

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                • carriecopadraws
                  carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                  Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

                  0_1516222033035_triple-dog-dare-finished-tall.jpg

                  Carrie Copa
                  https://carriecopadraws.com/

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                  • D
                    Dian last edited by

                    Again, thank you Will! 🙂 0_1516274975138_dieren op fiets_dian.jpg

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                    • K
                      kerilynnwilson last edited by kerilynnwilson

                      @Will-Terry
                      Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
                      0_1516302045289_Untitled-3.jpg

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                      • audrey dowling
                        audrey dowling @Will Terry last edited by

                        @will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it 🙂

                        website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                        twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                        facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                        • beckporter
                          beckporter last edited by

                          I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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                          • beckporter
                            beckporter last edited by

                            Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
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                            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

                              @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

                              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                              • beckporter
                                beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

                                @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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                                • EunJi Jung
                                  EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                  @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

                                  Eunji Jung

                                  Illustrator | Designer
                                  eunjijung.com
                                  instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                                  • K
                                    kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                                    @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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                                    • A
                                      Alex Diaz last edited by

                                      Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
                                      0_1516553569402_TheBestIsYetToCome.png

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                                      • Eli
                                        Eli @Alex Diaz last edited by

                                        @alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

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                                          Alex Diaz last edited by

                                          @eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.

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                                          • Boris Bayo
                                            Boris Bayo last edited by

                                            Hi Will!

                                            I've been on SVS binge watching a lot of the classes and trying to apply the principles to my work. I would love to have some critiques for this one. Kind regards!!

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                                            www.borisbayo.com
                                            www.facebook.com/borisbayo/
                                            www.instagram.com/boris_bayo/

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