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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • audrey dowling
      audrey dowling last edited by

      Here's mine again 🙂 (bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)
      0_1516182627722_Happy Hatch day sketch 3.jpg

      website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
      twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
      facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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      • Will Terry
        Will Terry last edited by

        Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!

        I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.

        SVS Instructor
        http://willterry.com/

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        • Will Terry
          Will Terry @audrey dowling last edited by

          @audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!

          SVS Instructor
          http://willterry.com/

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          • carriecopadraws
            carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

            Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

            0_1516222033035_triple-dog-dare-finished-tall.jpg

            Carrie Copa
            https://carriecopadraws.com/

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              Dian last edited by

              Again, thank you Will! 🙂 0_1516274975138_dieren op fiets_dian.jpg

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                kerilynnwilson last edited by kerilynnwilson

                @Will-Terry
                Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
                0_1516302045289_Untitled-3.jpg

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                • audrey dowling
                  audrey dowling @Will Terry last edited by

                  @will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it 🙂

                  website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                  twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                  facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                  • beckporter
                    beckporter last edited by

                    I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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                    • beckporter
                      beckporter last edited by

                      Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
                      0_1516394876444_whisperandpointsmall.jpg

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

                        @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • beckporter
                          beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

                          @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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                          • EunJi Jung
                            EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

                            Eunji Jung

                            Illustrator | Designer
                            eunjijung.com
                            instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                              kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                              @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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                                Alex Diaz last edited by

                                Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
                                0_1516553569402_TheBestIsYetToCome.png

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                                • Eli
                                  Eli @Alex Diaz last edited by

                                  @alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

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                                    Alex Diaz last edited by

                                    @eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.

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                                    • Boris Bayo
                                      Boris Bayo last edited by

                                      Hi Will!

                                      I've been on SVS binge watching a lot of the classes and trying to apply the principles to my work. I would love to have some critiques for this one. Kind regards!!

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                                      www.borisbayo.com
                                      www.facebook.com/borisbayo/
                                      www.instagram.com/boris_bayo/

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                        0_1516754807892_treehouse.jpg

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          A Former User last edited by

                                          0_1516798446357_Vatten.jpg

                                          Here's one that I put a lot of effort into, and got very disappointed by the result. I really don't like it, but have no idea where I went wrong 🙂

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                                            A Former User last edited by

                                            wip - character development idea for a story.. yeah they're gloves not badly drawn hands.. ![0_1516827367787_boy.jp2](Uploading 100%)

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