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      Alberto M last edited by

      Thanks you very much! It was brightened already from !http://forum.svslearn.com/uploads/files/1437661186671-values.jpg, and it's now even more, but still need clear value ranges as you pointed out to be readable, the way to pop out the face and the body gotta be stronger, will apply these points, kudos

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        Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

        update
        should I push brights on bg or her?

        wip.jpg
        vs
        wip-lighter-bg.jpg
        seems that it reads better on second, but gotta do a better layer than that

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          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

          it's still really underexposed feeling. I would do a simple 5 value study with no rendering to try and nail it down.

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            Alberto M @Lee White last edited by

            @Lee-White said:

            it's still really underexposed feeling. I would do a simple 5 value study with no rendering to try and nail it down.

            how about now?

            study-to-fix.jpg

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              Alberto M last edited by

              discard last one, doing again

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                Alberto M last edited by

                long way to go 😞

                bump_me_sempai.jpg

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                  Alberto M last edited by

                  workout.jpg

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                    Leontine @Alberto M last edited by

                    @Alberto-M Nice! I think its Improving a lot. maybe you should let it rest for a view days?

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                      Alberto M @Leontine last edited by Alberto M

                      @Leontine-Gaasenbeek

                      won't rest yet, I know what to do next, fix left eye (painted over it without accurate brush and messed it a bit xD)
                      work on hands and sand chrono
                      draw all small details, then render

                      then add more local contrasts to everywhere

                      oh, and just realiced that the background is a map of the composition narrative, face to chrono to the face again in that bg circles with help of the shadow

                      dat classes! 😛

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                        Alberto M last edited by

                        small update
                        fbb.jpg

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