Dream Portfolio and growing as an artist.
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@Chip-Valecek it’s really great to see your progress Chip. Did you go straight into painting or did you start with a sketch layer?
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@Meta I usually mess around with the levels and saturation at the end of a painting. I think it was more of my color choices that went wrong with it.
@peteolczyk I did a sketch first, then values, and then color layer on top.
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@Chip-Valecek this is coming along great. Matt Dixon's work is beautiful. I have followed him for a while as well. I am very interested to see your next piece. Keep it up.
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Next master copy. I am much happier with the result of this one. Still not a perfect copy, but I really learned a lot on process and how to come up with different color variations through out the painting. Mine is on the left (obviously)
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@Chip-Valecek Really good copy!! I can see how much you're learning from this process, it's awesome to see
I think one of the main things yous might want to focus on next is how much blurrier yours looks compared to your originals. This is very tricky. When doing digital painting there's a lot of blending and airbrushing going around to get that really nice smooth shading. However there are still sharp edges to the shapes themselves, it would really boost your painting quality to figure out how to make those sharp edges -
@Chip-Valecek You did not fail I think you did really well.It needs a bit more detail or texture now.I notice he has a lot more blues and purples in the skin of the original
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very nice Chip! Now I think it would benefit you to start looking closely at surface detail and hardness instead of doing another master copy. I would recommend taking very small areas of each of the paintings you have done so far and just doing sample paints of them. Just focus on getting the quality of paint they are getting.
In the second painting, the edges of the objects are hard. So you need to be making selections to paint within and that becomes very easy. Next, you need to get a set of brushes that works better for this type of painting. The general photoshop brushes wont work. And you need to turn off the opacity control and paint at 100 opacity using a textured oil brush. Here's a sample paint I did with your head on the left. Mine is on the right and I just messed around with it until it started having that look. I think it could be closer, but it's getting there. Very fun and good to do this type of work. Remember, doing the full painting is just one type of master copy. You can focus on any little thing that is giving you trouble. That is what this exercise is for. : )
One other thing I will note here- You need to make sure your description of your work and the mastercopy are just fact based, not judgement based. A judgment would be something like "the original is good, and mine is bad". Avoid this at all costs. The way to really use this exercise is to be specific. Example: "The original has harder texture and edges and mine has softer and less focused edges". Or the "The original has more color than mine does" etc. This is important because it is specific and tells you what you need to do to fix it. The goal here is to match it perfectly, and you can't do that without constant non-judgemental feedback.
Lastly I will add that this process of doing master copies should not be taken lightly. It may take months to really get it down. Or years. There is a school in Europe for sculpting. They don't let students do their own sculptures for the first THREE YEARS. The whole time they have to do perfect master copies and if they don't get those down, they don't advance in the program. My point here is to be kind to yourself and don't have the expectation that a few weeks of work is really anything in the grand scheme of things. Take your time and enjoy the process. Go slow and really look at each piece you are studying. Break it down into smaller chunks. And use specific feedback to guide you.
Hope that helps some. Keep it up! : )
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@Chip-Valecek you have made great progress with the colors!
I can't give better advice than @Lee-White on your next steps. But I can see this process already paying off for you!
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@Lee-White awesome feedback! I will definitely break them down. I think that might help from overwhelming me with trying to nail all parts of the painting.
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Great job chip. Something I noticed, color-wise, is that the original has a stronger warm vs cool setup on the clouds and the swing. The light areas are quite warm and the shadows are quite cool in comparison. You haven't quite pushed it that far.
