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    • carlossketches
      carlossketches last edited by

      Here are the latest changes. Thank you all for the amazing feedback!!

      Screen Shot 2015-12-17 at 9.02.07 PM.png

      "The unexamined life is not worth living." - Socrates

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      • carlossketches
        carlossketches @carlossketches last edited by

        @carlossketches updated with comparison

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        • carlossketches
          carlossketches @carlossketches last edited by

          @carlossketches updated with print picture

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          • bharris
            bharris last edited by

            Your final product turned out really lovely! The extra color and shapes added a lot of dynamic, but still kept it readable and calm for a child's room. Well done!

            www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
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            • Rich Green
              Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

              I like seeing how you prepared your print for gifting! It came out great and the added touch of the string around the sleeve etc really adds to the presentation. I am sure they will love your gift!

              www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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              • Lydia M
                Lydia M last edited by

                Aw I like the changes. It's funny how adding a tiny line at her mouth changed her emotion.

                www.lydiamueller.com
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                • Dulcie
                  Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                  Great comparison with the first and final pieces, it looks great in its gift packaging too! I'm glad you kept the foreground trees, they definitely add depth to the piece.

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                  • carlossketches
                    carlossketches @bharris last edited by

                    @bharris thank you!! yeah, my wife kept pushing for more animals and the colors of the fox and bird really add to the final piece.

                    "The unexamined life is not worth living." - Socrates

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                    • carlossketches
                      carlossketches @Rich Green last edited by

                      @Rich-Green thank you, that was my wife's touch with the string. she really gets the best out of me. and they did really love the gift and let me know how great they thought it was. I'm always afraid people won't like my work and then they shower me with compliments, it's so weird.

                      "The unexamined life is not worth living." - Socrates

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                      • carlossketches
                        carlossketches @Lydia M last edited by

                        @gimmehummus yes!! once you pointed that out, i knew i had to make her look happy and not afraid. that line and a couple minor changes did the trick. thanks again for that feedback while I was working on it.

                        "The unexamined life is not worth living." - Socrates

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                        • carlossketches
                          carlossketches @Dulcie last edited by

                          @Dulcie thank you, it was fun to see how far the piece had gone. i'm always stopping short of the potential and i'm glad i posted it here to get awesome feedback that made the piece really come together.

                          "The unexamined life is not worth living." - Socrates

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