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    • CG Raine
      CG Raine last edited by

      Children's book illustration sketches

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      • CG Raine
        CG Raine last edited by CG Raine

        Working on the 'book' again, got discouraged at one point and am just picking up where I left off, any critique would be great, this is a sketch for the cover, Fowl Play at the Fair.

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        • Christina Brown
          Christina Brown @CG Raine last edited by

          @CG-Raine One thing that catches my eye is the wing on the far left goose. Something is off in the viewpoint/anatomy. Also there are a few tangents where the goats head meets that umbrella. I like the playfulness of it all though! Keep working!

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          • Naroth Kean
            Naroth Kean last edited by

            What a fun place to be. I hope you don't mind me drawing over your sketch. My English is not good so I just thought I should give my thoughts through drawing.
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            • CG Raine
              CG Raine @Naroth Kean last edited by

              @Naroth-Cow Wow thanks! Going to re work things a bit, thank you so much for the input and taking the time for the draw over, so glad I joined this group 😃 I will re post with the edited version 😃

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              • CG Raine
                CG Raine @Christina Brown last edited by

                @Christina-Taylor-Brown Thank you for the input, I didn't even notice it! I will make that wing more defined; and will re draw that naughty goat's head away from the umbrella, everything they see is food 😛

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