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    • Cayleen
      Cayleen @Cayleen last edited by

      Oh, I see little garden there! Hmm, what about zooming in on the house a bit and having hanging teapot planters around the front door, full of different tea plants?

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      • erinrew
        erinrew @lpetiti last edited by

        He is a gentle soul who likes to bake and drink tea.

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        • erinrew
          erinrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I like this idea. Thank you.

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          • erinrew
            erinrew @Cayleen last edited by

            @Cayleen Love you’re ideas! Thank you for the suggestions. 😊

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            • erinrew
              erinrew last edited by

              Does anyone else get nervous when you start to add color? I need to figure out a process to help me with my color anxiety.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @erinrew last edited by

                @erinrew yes! I actually made a comment to @Lee-White on Instagram earlier today about his book mobile, he had one in color and one just in value like sepia colored and I said I needed to do this because I love so many images in value before they even get color I hadn’t even thought to make duplicates keep one in sketch or value and then another in color! Or just duplicate to try different color schemes!

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                • Jacy13
                  Jacy13 @erinrew last edited by

                  @erinrew It's looking great! I'm loving the purple in the sky. It looks peaceful 🙂

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                  • erinrew
                    erinrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos Good idea... unfortunately I did not do that with this one, but so think I will start.

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                    • erinrew
                      erinrew @Jacy13 last edited by

                      @Jacy13 Thank you Jacy. I work on it a little bit at a time to help cope with my nervousness in laying down color. Kind of like dipping your toe in a cold pool. 😂

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                      • erinrew
                        erinrew last edited by

                        This is my latest version. What’s working, what’s not? Thanks in advance.

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                        • ambiirae
                          ambiirae @erinrew last edited by

                          @erinrew I really love the concept and the color of the sky plus the smoke but I feel the wood colors and house colors are too muted. I find I want to look at the sky and smoke more than the house

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            I agree with @ambiirae there’s so much contrast in the background I feel like you should bring some of that darkness forward a little

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                            • K.Flagg
                              K.Flagg last edited by

                              I love the smoke design! I would lighten the background instead of darkening the foreground. If you darken the foreground it will be to saturated I think.

                              K.Flagg

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @K.Flagg last edited by

                                @K-Flagg oh yah even better

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                                • erinrew
                                  erinrew last edited by

                                  I lightened the sky a bit. I don’t want to go to light with it, but is this better?

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Yes I think it looks better with that little difference!and I just love the smoke detail, beautiful.

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                                    • chrisaakins
                                      chrisaakins @Asyas_illos last edited by chrisaakins

                                      @erinrew I think the trees in the background and the snow rendering do not stylistically conform with your smoke and cabin rendering. They look painterly and the rest looks more patterned and line artist (which I like, BTW) I would be curious to see what would happen if you rendered them like your smoke and kept the values the same.

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