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    • shinjifujioka
      shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

      Progress pic.

      Write Your Own Script progress 2.jpg

      shinjifujioka.com
      https://www.facebook.com/shinjifujiokaart
      IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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      • Charlie Eve Ryan
        Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

        great work, love seeing the progress!

        Happy Creating
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        • Peter Jarvis
          Peter Jarvis @shinjifujioka last edited by

          @shinjifujioka Loving your concept. The colours are just right. Looking forward to seeing the finished piece.

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          • sergio
            sergio last edited by

            What's the black shape? A pet?

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            • shinjifujioka
              shinjifujioka SVS OG @sergio last edited by

              @sergio Yep, this is a piece from a series of images about a boy and his dog.

              shinjifujioka.com
              https://www.facebook.com/shinjifujiokaart
              IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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              • sergio
                sergio last edited by

                Until now, it looks perfect for me. Loved the colors. I'm curious about the final result, specially the light setting and general "mood".

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                  love the color it feels very nice and fresh. It feels good.

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                  • bharris
                    bharris last edited by

                    @shinjifujioka You always have great shapes! I just got done with the Creative Environment Design class and I'm really noticing the interest you create in your images.

                    www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                    www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                    • shinjifujioka
                      shinjifujioka SVS OG @bharris last edited by

                      @bharris Thanks! I'll have to check that course out 🙂

                      shinjifujioka.com
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                      IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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                      • natiwata
                        natiwata SVS OG @shinjifujioka last edited by

                        @shinjifujioka This is really great, love the perspective and how lived in the room looks. Just checked out your blog, I really love your art! Such beautiful use of color and light. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

                        Nat Iwata
                        www.iwataillustration.com

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                        • Katrina Fowler
                          Katrina Fowler last edited by

                          Great work! I've enjoyed seeing these two on their adventures. The room is rendered quite well with perspective and detail...however I noticed that the corner of the room is directly in the center of the image which also lines up with the edge of the chair. Not sure if that was intentional or not. It might end up cutting the image in half visually. Perhaps cropping in? Move the book shelf cause that stuff is fun to look at.

                          Just a thought... Hope you don't mind. 🙂
                          1452930112531-write-your-own-script-sketch.jpg

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                          • shinjifujioka
                            shinjifujioka SVS OG @Katrina Fowler last edited by

                            @Katrina-Fowler Yeah, I noticed that too. I'll probably try to crop the image on the right hand side. Or somehow do some carpentry and move the corner of the room a bit.

                            shinjifujioka.com
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                            IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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                            • shinjifujioka
                              shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                              Final! (version 1) Thoughts? Feedback? Pizza? (I'm hungry right now).

                              Write Your Own Script v1.jpg

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                                A Former User last edited by

                                This is excellent! Such a great sense of light and space. You also did a great job keeping a tight handle on the focal point while also giving the eye ample room to take in all the great detail. So good.

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                                • Leontine
                                  Leontine @shinjifujioka last edited by Leontine

                                  @shinjifujioka Off course Sinji, Your piece is awesome! What bothers me is the color of the light, coming from the window. Why not lighten it up a bit, and push the contrast way more? It would give it some interest I think. 1453780757160-write-your-own-script-v1kopie.jpghope this helps!

                                  Leontine
                                  "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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                                  • Lee Holland
                                    Lee Holland last edited by

                                    I think it looks great. l love the wall art and the paintings.

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                                    • shinjifujioka
                                      shinjifujioka SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

                                      @Leontine Thanks for the suggestion! I'll have to play around with that idea.

                                      shinjifujioka.com
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                                      IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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                                      • Leontine
                                        Leontine @shinjifujioka last edited by

                                        @shinjifujioka please follow your own idea's, it was just a suggestion, I hope that this character will end up having his own book, it is just awesome! Love your style and strong use of lights and darks! Chapeau!

                                        Leontine
                                        "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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                                        • Rich Green
                                          Rich Green SVS OG @shinjifujioka last edited by

                                          @shinjifujioka I have looked at this piece a few times now and each time I come back to this post I see some new detail you placed into the room that I did not notice before. That is what I love about it - and why I think kids would really enjoy this in a storybook that they read over and over again.

                                          I also think you are so talented with perspective and scale in this interior scene like that. Its really great work. And of course all of Helmets artwork is fantastic! I can only hope to be as good of an artist as little Helmet is someday! 🙂

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                                          • shinjifujioka
                                            shinjifujioka SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

                                            @Leontine Oh don't worry, I end up going with what I like best in the end. But during the process, it helps me to get inspiration from other sources. That could be looking at other artwork, watching films, or getting suggestions from other people like yourself :). Honestly, I feel the most comfortable with getting inspiration from other artwork and watching films or just taking a walk and thinking, but this forum has been a great crowd to bounce ideas off of. I'll even read suggestions that people have on stuff that other people have submitted and think about how I could improve my own art. Thank you for the kind words!

                                            shinjifujioka.com
                                            https://www.facebook.com/shinjifujiokaart
                                            IG: @shinjifujiokastudio

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