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    March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!

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    • jaepereira
      jaepereira SVS OG last edited by

      I like the one with the four arms and the one with the fish on the head

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

        @jaepereira thanks a lot!!

        Here is another approach to the traveler design!
        This time it s a little demon who is called to action in order to find help for his people!!
        What do you think guys?

        TRAVELLER2.jpg

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        • braden H
          braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @Georgios-Christopoulos Ooh! I like! I'd be careful with the dark sclera and light iris. It can go from neat to straight creepy real fast!

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          • Georgios Christopoulos
            Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett this is actually pretty true! Love your designs this month btw!

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            • braden H
              braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

              @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

              @Braden-Hallett this is actually pretty true! Love your designs this month btw!

              Thanks! Lovin' your designs too. We're both doin' demon/devil boys this challenge 😃

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              • Larue
                Larue last edited by

                I too, like the second to last one, big head, big eyes, short body. Don't know what's going on with the one dark eye but he seems determined and a bit ready for anything.

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                • Georgios Christopoulos
                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett seen that!Sammy looks so good! Plus ,I love his deception skills!!
                  @Larue Thanks a lot!! Well,since i first saw the dragonball z franchice when I was a kid, and saw majin buu, https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Kid_Buu I fell in love with black eyes design!!

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                  • donnamakesart
                    donnamakesart last edited by

                    I love the one in the whale hat. just inspired a character idea haha. this prompt is so up your alley XD

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos @donnamakesart last edited by

                      @donnamakesart Glad it inspired something!!Thanks!!

                      One more development of the previous designs.
                      Not sure if I ll go with this fella, just explore with him a bit.
                      What do you think?
                      Little critter baby stuck with him on his journey...Forcing him to grow up a bit faster..

                      TRAVELLER3.jpg

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos that’s a really interesting way you’ve drawn the eyes. I like the idea of a sidekick making the youthful main character having to be more grown-up.

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                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                          Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

                          @lizardillo thanks so much! Yeah, I have been flirting with the idea of a young hero taking care of an unexpected "burden" that will ultimately be the reason he succeeds in his journey. I don't know if I ll go with that direction though.

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                          • Christina Kal
                            Christina Kal last edited by

                            Happy to see a fellow Greek art friend here! Hello!

                            Love how the design turned out, really nice work. Can't wait to see it colored. 👍🏻

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                            • miranda-hoover
                              miranda-hoover @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                              @Georgios-Christopoulos Yes! Love that idea!

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                              • Melissa_Bailey
                                Melissa_Bailey @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                @Georgios-Christopoulos really nice sketches. Love how you play with shapes.

                                Just want to share my initial impression, as it might be helpful.

                                At first glance, to me, this character looks a lot like Winslow your yeti, without the beard. Perhaps adding color might make them more different, but they feel very much like they could be related or live in the same world.

                                On the flip side, your style is very recognizable, so that's a good thing! I knew it was your work before seeing your name.

                                illustrator - author - smiley person
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                                • Georgios Christopoulos
                                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                  @Christina-Kal thanks christina!!happy to meet you here!
                                  @miranda-hoover Thanks Miranda!!
                                  @Melissa-Bailey-0 Thanks Melissa!That is actually pretty true!Based on your opinion I changed him a bit, because I see your point.
                                  I don t want adding colour to make the difference between the designs, so it was a pretty constructive comment.Thanks!!Ps, Check the next design and give me your opinion if you could!!

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                                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                    Lyon Deofol! (Apollyon Deofol)
                                    Or I think he is!!Maybe I ll change the name later, but the design grew up on me!

                                    So, Lyon is an albino Devil kid, who lives in a peaceful underground demon village.
                                    So events occured and this kid was tasked to find the legendary demon warrior,Oni, in order to save his village from the imminent attack of these despicable Goblin-Angels , who live above the clouds!

                                    Basic design is done, now it s time to work on poses,clothing, Equipment and all the fun stuff!!

                                    Opinions are welcome!!!

                                    TRAVELLER4.jpg

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                                    • jenithornhill
                                      jenithornhill last edited by

                                      I think they are all great, and your character is developing well. You should keep the initial sketches handy, as I think the first character in the 2nd row will be a fantastic Hero, just incase one of the future assignments in this set calls
                                      for drawing him/her.

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                                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                                        Georgios Christopoulos @jenithornhill last edited by

                                        @jenithornhill thanks! I agree, but the influences of Link from Zelda are too strong on him.. Thanks for the words! You are awesome!

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                                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                                          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                          Some more designs before entering the layout and detailed sketch mode!!
                                          Getting to know the character more and more!!

                                          TRAVELLER5.jpg

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                            @Georgios-Christopoulos Nice! I'm lovin' all the time you're takin' on preliminary design stuff 🙂

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