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    • lmrush
      lmrush Pro SVS OG @Thrace last edited by

      @Thrace Thank you so much Thrace. I totally agree. It is so easy to see once someone else points it out!!!

      Lisa Rush
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      • sergio
        sergio last edited by

        Wow, great composition improvement. A very simple change did make easier to catch the focal point. The concep is pretty nice. I'll be paying attention to updates.

        Thanks for sharing.

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

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          Working on the recommended changes- So much better!! First time getting help with illustrations in the forum- definitely worth the fear of putting yourself out there!

          Lisa Rush
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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Does anyone have thoughts on varying styles within one illustration? The focal point being more detailed and the other wolves being a little looser?

            Lisa Rush
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            • bharris
              bharris last edited by

              This is so warming and I really like your color choices so far! Can't wait to see updates!

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              • lmrush
                lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                @bharris Thank you !

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                  the way you handle paint is very interesting to me and I really like it! I feel like this scene wanted to be a bit more intimate, and I think cropping it out a bit can help to bring the warmness together. I don't know if my cropping is the best here but just a thought. If you haven't I recommend watching Lee White's Visual Storytelling Techniques course; it has helped me a ton. Good luck!
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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    @Naroth-Kean Thank you so much I will definitely take cropping into consideration Also thank you for the class suggestion! Still learning to paint digitally I used to paint traditionally but love the flexibility of digital

                    Lisa Rush
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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

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                      Update on progress, struggling with the sky-any painting tips/ tricks to smooth transition of colors?

                      Lisa Rush
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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

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                        Ok, I have stared at this for too long. I am thinking I will call this puppy done. Thank you for all your input. I wanted to try to finish per Wills suggestions, thank you Thrace for the suggestions of the dogs all around happy to see her and Naroth for the crop suggestion, I still plan on drawing that one; cropped with puppies all around, then I can add them both to my portfolio showing keeping character consistent 🙂

                        Lisa Rush
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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG @sergio last edited by

                          @sergio Thank you Sergio, looking forward to seeing all the entries

                          Lisa Rush
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                          • Rich Green
                            Rich Green SVS OG @lmrush last edited by

                            @lmrush being a huge dog lover and someone who has had a husky in the past as well, this really speaks to me. I love the interesting choice of colors and the painterly look too!

                            www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                            • lmrush
                              lmrush Pro SVS OG @Rich Green last edited by

                              @Rich-Green Happy to hear it! I obviously am a dog lover, I have a black and chocolate lab and my in laws lab is visiting so I have three underfoot at the moment.

                              Lisa Rush
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