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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

      Nice sketch work Charlie Eve!

      Don't forget that even in sketch work you want to have a focal point. for watercolor, you need to figure out where you want to hold an edge and where to let it go. It's tough because it can go bad SO quick! : )

      In this paint over, I made the head/beak/flower the focal point and let the paint bleed around a little bit as I moved away from that area. I added a slight background tone too. You want to watch our for hard edges at the edge of the paper (like the stem of the flower). The splatter is cool, but think of it as Habanero sauce. A little goes a long way. (It can get gimmicky really quick).

      Great work. Keep it up! 1454952479914-hummingbirdwatercolorink.jpg

      Hope that helps a bit.

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Charlie Eve Ryan
        Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

        @Lee-White Oh fading the edge on the flower and adding the light toned background really helps make the white near the eye pop. Wonderful paint over and tips! Thanks so much Lee! I'll work on that.

        Thanks @Rich-Green and @Sergio I'll keep that in mind about the composition tweak and maybe add a bit more detail to the feathers!

        Happy Creating
        www.charlieeveryan.com

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        • Charlie Eve Ryan
          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Round 2 with @Lee-White's advice and added a bit more ink too per @Rich-Green. Thanks guys!HummingbirdWatercolorInk2.jpg

          Happy Creating
          www.charlieeveryan.com

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          • Charlie Eve Ryan
            Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

            One more mark to help define that wing 😃HummingbirdWatercolorInk3.jpg

            Happy Creating
            www.charlieeveryan.com

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            • Rich Green
              Rich Green SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

              @Charlie-Eve-Ryan it is amazing what an impact that background tone, that Lee suggested, adds to the piece overall. It really does give it a sense of place to the whole thing. Wow today has been a great learning day here at the SVS Forums! So much good stuff to pick up on!

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

                Much better. When laying in the background, you need to control the softness or hardness of the edge. Wet the paper first and the paint will do the work for you.

                At this stage, you can get a soft edge by wetting a bristle brush using CLEAN water and lightly scrub the edge. Pat dry with a paper towel. If it doens't come up on the first try, dry the paper with a hair dryer and do the same step again. The reason for that is scrubbing wet paper will start to destroy the paper.

                1454955104230-hummingbirdwatercolorink3.jpg

                SVS Faculty Instructor
                www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                • Charlie Eve Ryan
                  Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by Charlie Eve Ryan

                  Wow @Lee-White thanks for all the input, so helpful!! PS attempting to fix a watercolor painting is both exhilarating and terrifying! 😃 How's this one working?

                  HummingbirdWatercolorandink4.jpg

                  Happy Creating
                  www.charlieeveryan.com

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                  • Lee White
                    Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    there ya go! nice!

                    SVS Faculty Instructor
                    www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Thanks Lee!!

                      Happy Creating
                      www.charlieeveryan.com

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                      • Spencer Hale
                        Spencer Hale last edited by

                        So cool to see the feedback and progress. It looks awesome!

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                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @Spencer Hale last edited by Charlie Eve Ryan

                          @Spencer-Hale Thanks Spencer. Lee is so generous with his time and always gives really concrete advice. SVS rocks!

                          Happy Creating
                          www.charlieeveryan.com

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