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    • Chip Valecek
      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

      I like the second option better. I would watch the feet on the groom, the back foot looks off to me.


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      • mattramsey
        mattramsey last edited by mattramsey

        I'm normally a fan of "zoomed in" but I like the wider shot, second picture, better.

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        • bharris
          bharris last edited by

          I like the zoomed out picture as well. 🙂

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          • Thrace
            Thrace last edited by

            2nd one for me as well, very cute!!

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            • Rich Green
              Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

              I definitely prefer the zoomed out variation as well!

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              • sergio
                sergio last edited by

                Zoomed out, indeed. Lovely.

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                • Carrie
                  Carrie @Chip Valecek last edited by

                  @Chip-Valecek Thank you! I'm working on him 🙂

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                  • Carrie
                    Carrie @mattramsey last edited by

                    @mattramsey Thanks for the input!! Sorry I'm slow on my reply.

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                    • Carrie
                      Carrie @bharris last edited by

                      @bharris Thanks for input!!

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                      • Carrie
                        Carrie @Thrace last edited by

                        @Thrace Thanks for the input, I appreciate it!

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                        • Carrie
                          Carrie @sergio last edited by

                          @sergio Thanks for your thoughts!!

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                          • Carrie
                            Carrie @Rich Green last edited by

                            @Rich-Green Thank you for sharing!!

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                            • Naroth Kean
                              Naroth Kean last edited by

                              I like the second one as well. The deeper depth bring more focus to the newly wed couples, and I love foxes! I circled some tangents I found. Hope this helps! 2.jpg

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                              • Carrie
                                Carrie @Naroth Kean last edited by

                                @Naroth-Kean This helps a ton, thank you so much! Easy to fix, too.

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                                • Suzy Heitz
                                  Suzy Heitz last edited by

                                  Looks like you've got a great direction going on this one. I'm really feeling the depth in the last one. Looking good. Keep at it!

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                                  • lmrush
                                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                    I really like your progression can't wait to see it in color

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                                    • Carrie
                                      Carrie @lmrush last edited by

                                      @lmrush Thank you, ma'am! I may be overworking it, but it's a great learning process 🙂

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