27 Aug 2021, 17:58

@Moana-Maureen My eye likes red, so I kinda prefer the color of the first...however, the neat thing is that only in the cooler version did I notice the adorable little creature with the yarn trap. So cute! So I think the cooler version is better.

Your handling of the lighting (in both versions!) in this is tremendous. Wonderful as it is, the lighting on the blackboard area competes a bit with what it going on in the foreground. How would you feel about pushing that area back/greying it down a bit, to make the triangle between adorable creature, newcomer and skeleton read better...I did a quick drawover to show what I mean.
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Also, the sunlight by the adorable creature's feet confused me a bit...shouldn't it extend over to the skeleton's feet?

Love the story this tells and how you handled it!