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    • sam marrero
      sam marrero last edited by

      1453876198805162-1.jpg For third Thursday

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      • lmrush
        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Such a sweet image, I especially love how you have rendered their coats

        Lisa Rush
        www.lisarushgallery.com
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        • Beatriz "Bett"
          Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

          I like the texture of the giraffes' skin. Nice subtle differences in the features that differentiate the boy from the girl.

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          • Camomilla
            Camomilla last edited by

            Love the heart in the negative space - so clever 🙂 Adorable giraffes 🙂

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            • bernadetta
              bernadetta last edited by

              It's great!!! I love it very much 🙂

              https://www.behance.net/bernadettacal

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                Great idea, my only crit would be to push the value on the little some more. Right now it sorta flows into the large one.


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                • Sarah LuAnn
                  Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

                  This is darling! I agree, the values are all pretty mid-range. It would be a bit more readable if the silhouette were clearer. Other than that, I think this looks awesome!

                  sarahluann.com

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                  • sam marrero
                    sam marrero last edited by

                    Thanks everyone. I will work on the background to get the values to contrast a bit. been so busy I might no make the deadline.

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