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    • stayhomejoe
      stayhomejoe last edited by

      I don’t know where to post for feedback. I would like to give and take feedback to further what my final project look likeGuy.pdf Untitled_Artwork.pdf

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      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz last edited by

        Very nice!
        I would suggest that maybe his back blue pant leg is slightly askew, it doesn’t look like it’s coming out of the right point of his pelvis. If you can slightly adjust his leg position, this is a really great piece.

        One other nitpicky thing would be that I would thin out the outline around the glove, it draws my eye too much towards his glove rather than the more important aspects of the illustration.

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        • Kim Hunter
          Kim Hunter @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @angelinakizz nice, except the tiger's back leg would naturally bend in the opposite direction. You created a rubber leg without bone structure. It does not match the bone structure of the front legs.

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          • stayhomejoe
            stayhomejoe @AngelinaKizz last edited by

            @angelinakizz thank you for the feedback. I was thinking of the tiger as being stuffed and didn’t think of anatomical
            structure. I will spend more time on the next one. This was rushed just to get something done.

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            • stayhomejoe
              stayhomejoe @Kim Hunter last edited by

              @kim-hunter thank you for spending the time to comment. I appreciate the feedback.

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