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    3rd Thurs. Window or no window?

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    • Spencer Hale
      Spencer Hale last edited by

      Great idea! If the girls are meant to be a main focal point of the piece, I would not have the window, or at least simplify it so they stand out more. You also could lighten or blur the background a bit to bring the focus back to the main characters. just my 2 cents.
      Love that little guy's face.

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      • Carrie
        Carrie @shinjifujioka last edited by

        @shinjifujioka Ha ha! They are difficult days...I just broke up a fight this morning. Fortunately, it wasn't about love 🙂 Thanks for the input!

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        • Carrie
          Carrie @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

          @Beatriz-"Bett" Thanks for the feedback!

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          • Carrie
            Carrie @Spencer Hale last edited by

            @Spencer-Hale Good advice, Spencer. Thank you so much. I really like the blurring the background idea. I'll try it!

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            • Naroth Kean
              Naroth Kean last edited by

              Like this image and story, with or without the window does not bother me. Wonder what high school is like in this country haha hopefully not like the movies.

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              • Sarah LuAnn
                Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

                I think their silhouettes read more clearly without the window. I agree that a bulletin board might work better than the window if you want to have something on that wall.

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                • Carrie
                  Carrie @Naroth Kean last edited by

                  @Naroth-Kean Thank you! I imagine schools all over have similar problems...love being one of them 🙂

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                  • Carrie
                    Carrie @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

                    @Sarah-LuAnn Thank you for your idea. I appreciate your thoughts. I'm going to try a bulletin board, too.

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                    • NickA
                      NickA last edited by

                      I vote no window, its a bit clearer.

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                      • Carrie
                        Carrie @NickA last edited by

                        @NickA Thanks!

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                        • sergio
                          sergio last edited by

                          I agree with no window guys 😛

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