WIP personal project
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Hey everyone! This is a test run I did for a larger piece I want to do. What do you think? Im open to any suggestions, thanks!
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@phoenix-yip As far as storytelling, this seems very abstract. But, it looks like it’s abstract on purpose? I like the movement in it and it’s very eye catching. The fish are great. It actually reminds me a bit of something Hieu would make. (I think he goes by @kelogsloops on Instagram.) The only critique I have is that I would move their heads closer together somehow… maybe tilting them or moving the bottom character down a bit. I just noticed that both of their eyelines are pointed at the other persons crotch. Eyes are such a natural focal point that they draw our eyes to wherever they are pointed. I hope that’s helpful. It is a very beautiful piece.
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@pamela-fraley yeah I think I actually made a note to myself about the crotch part, it is just a little awkward! Thanks for the advice!
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@phoenix-yip I think it will look great I really loved the other one you did too!
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@asyas_illos thanks a lot!
