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    • NickA
      NickA last edited by

      Trying my best to make the characters read:

      Practice_ShippingOffice-windows.png

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      • sergio
        sergio @NickA last edited by

        @NickA

        I think you are trying to do something realistic in terms of lighting. If not, forget this comment 🙂

        1. The lamp is being reflected in the wrong position. In fact, seems that the reflection must be hidden from your point of view.
        2. Due to the position of the lamp, the door must project its shadow.
        3. Also, due to the position of the lamp (light source), the chest of drawers must project a shadow in the wall and the floor.

        It only will be true if light still travels in a straight line.

        tones.jpg

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        • NickA
          NickA last edited by

          Thanks again Sergio. I will have a go at correcting those soon.

          Here's a block in I just did (I would say 'quick block in' but they take me a while, even when rough 😉 ).

          Practice_ShippingOffice tv.jpg

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          • NickA
            NickA last edited by

            I've also been working on the simple mushrooms from the course, I'll post those later on.

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            • NickA
              NickA last edited by

              Another attempt at the bedroom with some of Sergio's Suggestions.

              It takes more time without the linework, but the result is nice and painterly:

              Practice_RoomLight-2pt2-lamp-nicka-sergio-suggestions-.png

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              • NickA
                NickA last edited by

                just looking now, the drawer shadow seems a bit out of place dark, but I'll leave it for now.

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                  Really nice! I love the light coming in through the window and the the other light reflecting off the furniture.

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                    Wow! I like it! I can see how you took the feedback and it makes a difference.

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • NickA
                      NickA last edited by

                      Some mushrooms (More work on these to come later):

                      mushrooms.jpg

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                      • sergio
                        sergio @NickA last edited by sergio

                        @NickA

                        Pretty much better to me. Now you can feel the shapes by the lighting (tones). I see a couple of details:

                        • Part of the clothes in the closet must be darker. They are receiving the shadow of the door and part of the closet "box".
                        • The door and the chest of drawers are a bit crooked.
                        • There is a problem with one of the legs of the chest of drawers.

                        tones-2.jpg

                        Anyway, its a great improvement, I think you only need to tune a bit the intensity of the lights and shadows. The best way to me is by analizing some master pieces and, of course, practicing a lot. Just training your eyes.

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                        • NickA
                          NickA last edited by

                          Thank you Sergio. 🙂

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                          • NickA
                            NickA last edited by

                            A copy (in monochromatic green) of Will Terry's first mushroom example:

                            green-mushroom.png

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                            • NickA
                              NickA last edited by

                              A color attempt of the first office scene I shaded:

                              Practice_ShippingOffice-color-1.png

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                              • NickA
                                NickA last edited by

                                Color added to the bedroom scene:

                                Practice_RoomLight-2pt3-lamp-nicka-adding-color-.jpg

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                                • bharris
                                  bharris last edited by

                                  Nice job, these are great practice! I found it was so much easier to learn this stuff by using someone else's drawings so you can focus on the light and shadow and not what you want your drawing to look like. 🙂

                                  www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                                  www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                                  • NickA
                                    NickA last edited by

                                    Thank you Brittany. I agree, it's an efficient way to focus on tone and color and you can let go of adjusting the drawing a bit more. 🙂

                                    Sometimes it can a challenge to work out someone else's use of form and perspective though (but that's good training)

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                                    • NickA
                                      NickA last edited by

                                      Pretty surreal thing to color:

                                      Practice_Stairs-color-with-lines.jpg

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                                      • sergio
                                        sergio @bharris last edited by

                                        @bharris

                                        Your palettes are very interesting. How are you creating them?

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