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    • Griffin McPherson
      Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos don’t worry, I’ve got Will’s list of what should go in a portfolio right by my side!

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Griffin McPherson last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

        @Griffin hi! I like your style and there really has been improvement since the last time I saw your work. I personally think your style will fit best in older markets like Middle Grade or Young Adult.

        Regardless of the market tho, I can see that your portfolio is severely lacking narrative pieces. I see character design, a few set design, and some single character illustrations. But not many with chracters interacting with each other or doing something. You need to show an art director that you can illustrate a story. Right now, the only narrative pieces I see is that blue boy and the bottle.

        I might’ve already given this advice to you before but imma repeat myself.😅 Create more narrative illustrations. Choose maybe 3 stories and make at least 2 illustrations from each of them. I promise you this will make your portfolio stronger.

        I hope this helps. All the best.

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • Griffin McPherson
          Griffin McPherson @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz totally agree about that narrative pieces! That’s my main focus going forward with portfolio pieces. I also definitely see myself fitting into middle grade and young adult market better. I tend to enjoy stories that are a bit darker and more serious.

          Kind of makes me feel torn because I want to create pictures books because that’s the format I love but the types of stories I enjoy telling are more for young adults or even just adults. Now I’m wondering if I should revaluate making a children’s book portfolio altogether 😅

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          • KatrinaF
            KatrinaF last edited by

            Griffin. I think several of your pieces should go in your portfolio. I'd even suggest tweaking the brown cabin and snowy house to add characters and a story. Those are great. I also love the robot running off without his hand and the elf in the library. Like many others have already said you need characters interacting. 🙂

            Cheers
            Katrina

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Griffin McPherson last edited by

              @Griffin you could do both. Your current pieces look more suited for older audience so you might start from square one if you want to build a children’s book portfolio in my opinion. It doesn’t have to be big. Even just 8 pieces will do.

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • Griffin McPherson
                Griffin McPherson @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz 8 for a portfolio? I thought they’re supposed to be between 15 and 25 pieces. Or do you mean a portfolio that is a mix of children’s book and YA illustrations?

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Griffin McPherson last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                  @Griffin not really. As long as they are of good quality, you can start with less. Most illustrators would recommend 12. I say 8 coz 12 can still seem daunting. 8 can be a good number to start. And you can add more to it as you go on

                  Edit: yes, this is only for a children’s book portfolio. You can start with 8 and build it up as you go

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • Griffin McPherson
                    Griffin McPherson @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz as it is right now, what pieces do you think could stay (if any) and/or what pieces could work if I added character interactions to them? Thanks for your helpful advice as always!

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                    • Griffin McPherson
                      Griffin McPherson @ArtistErin last edited by

                      @ArtistErin thanks! Interesting to hear what stands out to you in my style. Hard to notice one’s own tendencies so that can be insightful!

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                        @Griffin I think you can tweak the background ones. Anyway, I suggest you create new pieces instead.

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • Griffin McPherson
                          Griffin McPherson @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @Nyrryl-Cadiz oh I’ll be making plenty of new ones, thanks!

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                          • Valerie Light
                            Valerie Light last edited by

                            @Griffin I like your style, but as others have said, you need scenes with interaction and story between characters. And while I understand (and share!) your worry about style cohesion, I think you're well within range. Look at Jillian Tamaki's website for inspo there.

                            When I looked through your work, I thought 7, 15, and 16, were cute but not standouts. Mainly because they mostly seemed to be saying the same thing. If you added a piece with, say, a few ghosties having dinner with 2 kids in a house, or something, you'd be on your way to some sequential narrative pieces that help tie things together.

                            1, 2, and 3 clearly go together in a narrative, but I think swapping one of them for a scene with character interaction might be a great addition.

                            I think 5, 11, 12, 13, 14 are a good basis to build from. And where's that cool Joe Todd Stanton guy from your Insta?

                            www.valerielightillustration.com
                            www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                            • Griffin McPherson
                              Griffin McPherson @Valerie Light last edited by

                              @Valerie-Light maybe I’ll add that guy in! I posted this before making that drawing. That’s a great point about some of the pieces "saying the same thing". I think each piece should have a distinct feeling in a portfolio, otherwise it’s sort of wasted space. I’d never even thought about the fact that I never really illustrate character interactions until I got the responses from this post so I’m glad that I did. An overarching sort of theme in my work for years has been solitude, often just individual characters in a story that’s just their own. I don’t want to abandon those kind of illustrations entirely but I see that they’re not fitting for a children’s book portfolio. Another angle is that maybe I can do some illustrations that are just individual characters but they’re interacting more heavily with the world around them.

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