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    • Johanna Kim
      Johanna Kim SVS OG @Pamela Fraley last edited by

      @Pamela-Fraley Aw, thanks Pamela. Your comment means so much, and I'm sorry you also felt bad when you won the Mermay contest. I remember your piece and how it totally captivated me. I hope you've since come to feel good about the win because you definitely deserved it.

      http://www.johannakim.com
      http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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      • Johanna Kim
        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Lisa Clark last edited by

        @Lisa-Clark Thanks so much:)

        http://www.johannakim.com
        http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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        • Johanna Kim
          Johanna Kim SVS OG @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

          @Jeremiahbrown Thanks:)

          http://www.johannakim.com
          http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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          • Pamela Fraley
            Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Johanna Kim last edited by

            @Johanna-Kim I do feel better about it. But, I also redid it and added a tail. 😂

            instagram.com/fraleycreates

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            • Kristen Lango
              Kristen Lango @LisaF last edited by

              @LisaF Hi Lisa! I didn't get an email with the link either. I'm a relatively new member of SVS and my email is studioklango@gmail.com
              Thanks!😊

              https://www.kristenlango.com/
              https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @Kim Rosenlof last edited by Lee White

                @Kim-Rosenlof @Johanna-Kim don't let it throw you off your game at all. There are a few "Truths" with contests and image making in general:

                1. EVERY image can be improved, no matter who makes it. Pros are no exception. I don't think there is a single image I have ever made that is perfect. Will, Jake, and I crit each other ALL THE TIME, and it would sound WAY harsher than what we do in crit arena. But at the same time, we don't even think about it because we are so used to that.. In fact, i would hate it if jake and will DIDN'T say what they think when looking at my work. "Hey, that hand looks funky", "Your color balance is way off", "Man, this one needs some help" kind of comments are both welcome and needed! This is how we lift each other up! If it wasn't honest, it wouldn't actually help!

                2. People will ALWAYS question the work in a contest. People will always wish we did something different, or didn't do something we did. It also just goes with the territory. In fact, this is exactly why we changed to the audience voting format! When we used to pick the winners, we would field a TON of emails from people telling us we are wrong. I will say this, We were unanimous about the 4 that ended up in the final. So don't worry about a thing. Your work was at a very high caliber and that is why you made it to where you did. : )

                Again, hope that helps! Everyone needs to remember that this is art, not science. THere is no easy recipe for why something will win. If there was, I would be using for ALL my images! lol! But again, the process of making images CAN be changed and as long as you are following the steps I mentioned in my last post, that is all you can do. THen cross your fingers and hope you get LUCKY!

                SVS Faculty Instructor
                www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                • LauraA
                  LauraA SVS OG @David last edited by LauraA

                  @David Hi all, I just wanted to say that though I couldn't watch this one live and didn't have a horse in the race, I watched it today with great interest. True, there were certain train-wreck qualities to it 😉 , but you guys said as much yourselves. What I liked about it was that it was a full episode devoted to how to improve one's story, with examples and draw overs. I learned a lot from that.

                  I may be weird, but I actually like this format very much. In the sweet 16, I get a bit thrown off by the pairing and all the talk about As and Bs. Here, it was just concept, concept, concept! (A lot like Will's new class, which was very useful, by the way!)

                  And I thought all of the finalists were fantastic!

                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                  http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                  • Johanna Kim
                    Johanna Kim SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White Thanks, this does help a lot. Really appreciate you taking the time.

                    http://www.johannakim.com
                    http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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                    • chrisaakins
                      chrisaakins last edited by

                      I didn’t get to watch all of it but fast forwarding through it I didn’t see my pic so I guess I didn’t get a critique. @Jeremiahbrown i thought for sure if we had a top 16 yours would be a winner. I loved the two winners too.

                      I really have no idea if my concept was clear or cliche now.

                      Chris Akins
                      www.chrisakinsart.com
                      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                      • Jeremiahbrown
                        Jeremiahbrown @chrisaakins last edited by

                        @chrisaakins Thanks Chris! I thought yours was super fun, memorable, and made me smile 🙂

                        Jeremiah Brown
                        www.jeremiahbrownillustration.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/jeremiah.brownillustration/

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                        • Cayleen
                          Cayleen @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                          @Jeremiahbrown Aw, thank you! I had to spend a day or two licking my wounds after being the 'bad' example of what not to do, lol. Your note was very welcome. I've decided I still like art and still have a lot to learn, so back at it! Thanks again!

                          Cayleen Blackmore

                          cayleencreates.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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