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    WIP for title page spread, please give feedback :)

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    • JessicaLinnEvans
      JessicaLinnEvans @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

      @Melissa_Bailey Yes! Great! Thanks again! I'll be working on that today.

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      • JessicaLinnEvans
        JessicaLinnEvans @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

        @JessicaLinnEvans Okay! Here's what I came up with!title with text holder.jpg

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        • Melissa_Bailey
          Melissa_Bailey @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

          @JessicaLinnEvans looking nice!

          Is the title one word? You don't have to show us if you're trying to keep it confidential, but it might be a good idea to actually test out the title on the parchment, to see if you have enough room.

          You have space to expand it horizontally, if need be.

          😊👍

          illustrator - author - smiley person
          mbaileyart.com
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            Robert Henderson @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

            @JessicaLinnEvans

            Wow!

            Very excellent work and inspirational. It looks like the adjustments you made really enhanced the illustration. Nice work!

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            • JessicaLinnEvans
              JessicaLinnEvans @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

              @Melissa_Bailey Hi! I added more words to the title. Not sure what it will be yet. 🙂

              Also, I put a bird on it (because I'm from Portlandia, LOL!)
              title with text holder.jpg

              jessicalinnevans.com/
              instagram.com/jessicalinnevans.illustration/
              twitter.com/JessEvans915

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              • JessicaLinnEvans
                JessicaLinnEvans @Robert Henderson last edited by

                @Robert-Henderson Thank you, Robert! That is encouraging!

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                instagram.com/jessicalinnevans.illustration/
                twitter.com/JessEvans915

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                • PenAndrew
                  PenAndrew @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

                  @JessicaLinnEvans This is really looking a lot better and I love your pencil work, beautifully done.

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                  • Kristen Lango
                    Kristen Lango @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

                    @JessicaLinnEvans Really lovely job on this Jessica! Isn't @Melissa_Bailey so helpful?! 😁 she just helped me to work through the color composition of a piece and it made all the difference.

                    I'm excited to see this cover spread in full color 🙂

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                    • JessicaLinnEvans
                      JessicaLinnEvans @PenAndrew last edited by

                      @PenAndrew Thank you! Sometimes I like my pencil drawings better than my finished work. Ha!

                      jessicalinnevans.com/
                      instagram.com/jessicalinnevans.illustration/
                      twitter.com/JessEvans915

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                      • JessicaLinnEvans
                        JessicaLinnEvans @Kristen Lango last edited by

                        @Kristen-Lango Yess! @Melissa_Bailey is so generous with her comments and her time! Thank you!!

                        jessicalinnevans.com/
                        instagram.com/jessicalinnevans.illustration/
                        twitter.com/JessEvans915

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                        • Melissa_Bailey
                          Melissa_Bailey @Kristen Lango last edited by

                          @Kristen-Lango & @JessicaLinnEvans -- wow, thanks so much! Glad I could help! ❤️

                          illustrator - author - smiley person
                          mbaileyart.com
                          instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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