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    • Christina Brown
      Christina Brown @Carrie last edited by

      @Carrie Not at all! It's so cute! thanks for sharing! 🙂

      Follow me on Instagram and twitter! @christinabdraws
      Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/cbrownillustration/

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      • Christina Brown
        Christina Brown last edited by

        Just wanted to catch you guys up on where I am. Here it is with some color. I'd say I'm about half way through. Saving the goose for last since he's the most important. Feel free to lend your advice, but keep in mind that this is still a WIP.
        My plans:

        -The terrier is a little too heavy in texture, planning to smooth him out a bit.
        -Need to work on all the hands you see.
        -Goose needs a paint-over
        -Barista need to be more defined.
        -etc., etc, etc, lol

        Thanks so much to Will Terry for the quick Skype lesson on brushes. I'm really enjoying the results after making those adjustments to my brush shape and adjusting the flow. You helped me break through to see the light! haha! Thank you SO much!

        Follow me on Instagram and twitter! @christinabdraws
        Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/cbrownillustration/

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        • Carrie
          Carrie last edited by

          This is really fantastic. You should be proud!

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Just love this well done!!!!

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
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            • sergio
              sergio @Christina Brown last edited by

              @Christina-Taylor-Brown

              Loved the color scheme. I'll be paying attention to the etc., etc, etc. and other improvements.

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              • bharris
                bharris last edited by

                Beautiful colors so far, can't wait to see more!

                www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                • NoWayMe
                  NoWayMe last edited by

                  I love this!!!

                  The only critique I can find is that the terrier looks like is about to fall off his chair... It's like he leaning back to try to find his balance or something. I think just fixing the perspective on the chair a little would fix that!

                  Other than that, great work! I love the color palette.

                  Would you mind sharing Will Terry's tips ? I struggle with brushes too...

                  Can't wait to see the final version of this one!

                  noemiegionetlandry.squarespace.com
                  noemie_illustration on Instagram

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                  • Christina Brown
                    Christina Brown last edited by

                    Thanks everyone! I feel like I'm done. I'm happy with it, and could end here, but if you'd like to give me your thoughts, go right ahead! Thank you again for your encouragement!

                    Follow me on Instagram and twitter! @christinabdraws
                    Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/cbrownillustration/

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                    • Christina Brown
                      Christina Brown @NoWayMe last edited by

                      @NoWayMe of course! It finally clicked for me after Will showed me how to change the shape of the brush, and to work in small "dabs" (if you will) gradually building up to the lights. Try fiddling with the shape of your brushes, and you'll see what I'm talking about!

                      Follow me on Instagram and twitter! @christinabdraws
                      Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/cbrownillustration/

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                      • Carrie
                        Carrie last edited by

                        I love it!

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                        • bharris
                          bharris last edited by

                          I love it too! Only concern I have is the counter color looses the dogs, but of course that makes the goose stand out too. 🙂

                          www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                          www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                          • Sarah LuAnn
                            Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

                            The horizontal line across the seat of the guy's pants is really distracting to me, it draws my attention much more than I'd like ;-). Other than that, I really like this, nicely done!

                            sarahluann.com

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