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    • ArtistErin
      ArtistErin last edited by

      Great job today... πŸ™‚

      I too am in the same boat as far as finding loose vs too tight, still trying to find my style and push boundaries, trying to get better. Staying true to me but leveling up...:)

      Erin Richardson
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      • MarcRobinson
        MarcRobinson @AngelinaKizz last edited by

        @AngelinaKizz this resonates with me so much, because I tend to over-render and smooth stuff out making it look plastic. I managed to get round some of this by not zooming in too much, and using textured brushes. If I keep the brush size bigger it'll force me to imply smaller details. I still struggle. I had to rework loads of my painting to get rid of the over rendered part, and force it to look looser. You'll figure it out, I really liked your entry.

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        • Katherine
          Katherine last edited by

          I really liked your entry, Angelina. Maybe try doing some masters studies of the loose styles you’re trying to emulate.

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz @Katherine last edited by

            @Katherine that's a great idea. For the next 3 days I'm actually in class with my fave, marco bucci, hopefully he'll have some guidance too on loose vs unfinished.

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            • AngelinaKizz
              AngelinaKizz @MarcRobinson last edited by

              @MarcRobinson I think your style is beautiful! I don't think you need to adjust at all. Your illos are totally picture book ready.

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              • MarcRobinson
                MarcRobinson @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                @AngelinaKizz too kind, thank you.

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                • ArtistErin
                  ArtistErin @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                  @AngelinaKizz That's cool... Marco Bucci and Aaron Blaise often pair up together to teach loose, yet "buttoned up" rendering which I do see some elements of Therese Larsson's techniques, all so inspiring. πŸ™‚ Keep up the good work!

                  Erin Richardson
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                  • ArtistErin
                    ArtistErin @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                    @AngelinaKizz I agree with you, @MarcRobinson your work is phenomenal and reminds me also of Brandon Dorman. So talented. You could teach a course yourself... πŸ™‚

                    Erin Richardson
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                    www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                    • MarcRobinson
                      MarcRobinson @ArtistErin last edited by

                      @ArtistErin I swear you guys are gonna make me blush! I've had such a warm reception here on the forum. Such a welcoming community.

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                      • ArtistErin
                        ArtistErin @MarcRobinson last edited by

                        @MarcRobinson LOL Oh I forgot to congratulate you for winning Critique Arena! πŸ™‚

                        Erin Richardson
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                        • MarcRobinson
                          MarcRobinson @ArtistErin last edited by

                          @ArtistErin I'll let you off this time... Just don't let it happen again πŸ˜‚

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                          • ArtistErin
                            ArtistErin @MarcRobinson last edited by

                            @MarcRobinson πŸ˜‚

                            Erin Richardson
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                            • NessIllustration
                              NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                              I find that a lot of the illustration can be loose as long as the important details are not. Faces, especially eyes, facial expressions, hands. The background? That can be hella loose, except any areas or props necessary to the understanding of the story. This loose/finished contrast can even help direct the eye towards the important bits. The eye will tend to skip over blurry, loose, or less detailed areas.

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                              • LauraA
                                LauraA SVS OG @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                @AngelinaKizz On loose vs. finished, John Singer Sargent comes to mind. Sargent would reportedly paint the same subject and then scrub it down for days in a row until he was satisfied. In the end, having worked quickly, it would look spontaneous. But by the time he had done this "spontaneous" painting, he knew where every stroke should go, or at least felt it in his fingers. This technique, at least as applied to oils in his time, was called alla prima painting. Marco Bucci has a similar style, BTW.

                                Another way to look at it is, you might have loose strokes, but you have a strong sense of structure.

                                And yeah, @MarcRobinson, way to go in the Critique Arena!

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                                • MarcRobinson
                                  MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

                                  @LauraA Sargent is the GOAT... And thank you!

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                                  • kylebeaudette
                                    kylebeaudette last edited by

                                    I like drawing 'loose'....too loose sometimes.

                                    It's hard finding that balance. My inspirations are pretty obvious. Watercolour and ink legends like Quentin Blake, Tim Burton, Ronald Searle...
                                    They all draw loose and lively, and colour their images haphazardly. I practiced doing the same for months and months.

                                    I think it's all about drawing interesting, lively facial expressions with good designs. It's not a simple thing to get good at. I've filled about 13 sketchbooks so far tryingπŸ˜…
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                                    • AngelinaKizz
                                      AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                      After 6 hours of intense learning with Marco Bucci today, I feel like a bunch of light bulbs all turned on at the same time. Things that should be obvious, I'd totally missed, like harder edges where there's importance, and deliberate areas of lost edges. I'm totally inspired to take previous works and start them over based on what i learned today, and I still have 12 more hours of learning time with him this weekend.

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                                      • ArtistErin
                                        ArtistErin @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                        @AngelinaKizz That sounds like the way I feel so much of the time, have to take tutorials in segments to integrate it all... Thank you for letting us know how you are doing πŸ™‚

                                        Erin Richardson
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                                        • ArtistErin
                                          ArtistErin @kylebeaudette last edited by

                                          @kylebeaudette You definitely inspire me... I love your stuff!!!!

                                          Erin Richardson
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                                          www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                                          • Griffin McPherson
                                            Griffin McPherson last edited by

                                            Something that has helped me loosen up is not using layers while I’m drawing. I’ll still separate line and color layers and whatnot but working on drawing layer and simply lightly erasing and redrawing things rather than having a rough sketch layer and then s clean sketch on top has really helped me.

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