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    3rd Thursday iPad pro doodle

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    • NoWayMe
      NoWayMe last edited by

      GREAT concept/idea and great sketch! I think both version would be good, but I personally like the idea of seeing Haven and maybe some screaming kids by the window! It would be funny!

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      • Kevin Longueil
        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

        @natiwata Thank you Nat - that really means a lot! - I like the wonder of not knowing what exactly is happening - I am thinking of a close-up though to see into the classroom - perhaps having happy kids looking out of the windows in wonder - not sure though - thanks for the thumbs up on the character design - this head is very baby beluga whale-ish - they have such charming faces 🙂
        @Naroth-Kean Thank you Naroth - That is a good idea - I bought Jake's Comic Book videos but have not gotten to them yet - so much to learn - I'm still working on how to make this image work as a close up too - hard to get all the information into one image - I'm sure that means I'm failing in a way but I still like where this is taking me - really appreciate the feedback!
        @NoWayMe Thank you Noemie! - really appreciate the support - I think you and Naroth and Nat are correct - I think I have to show Haven for this to work for the prompt - I'll post some ideas soon - thanks again!

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

          Working on Haven character - maybe have her looking out window with pink monster leash in hand - not sure 🙂 .....i've never drawn eyes this way before - they were originally just place holders but they are growing on me - are they too generic? Attachment-1-3.jpeg

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
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          • jacs
            jacs last edited by

            Cool stuff! Really inspiring!

            Magical, fairy tale art. Www.jacquelinewild.com

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @jacs last edited by

              @jacs Thank you Jacs! - I just checked out your website - very nice work!

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
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              • Naroth Kean
                Naroth Kean last edited by

                @Kevin-Longueil Hi Kevin, I really like the drawing of Haven but I think she could use some more sparkle in her eyes or little bit of wink eyelashes.

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                • sam marrero
                  sam marrero last edited by

                  Nice work, love to see more. You use an IPad for this? Awesome..

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                  • karien
                    karien last edited by

                    This is very cool!

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                    • jacs
                      jacs last edited by

                      Thanks Kevin, I appreciate that! Everyone here is so good - I'm glad to be part of it!

                      Magical, fairy tale art. Www.jacquelinewild.com

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                        @Naroth-Kean Thank you Naroth - you are right - i'll upload a tweak to her eyes and see what you think - thanks for your help!
                        @sam-marrero Thank you Sam - yes - it is on the iPad pro with the apple pencil - works really well!
                        @karien Thank you!

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                          @Naroth-Kean Sorry to bother you with minutia but is this where you were thinking i should head with the eyes? - such a small difference but i do like it better for sure - i see now though that i did not ad twinkle :).... i'll work on thatAttachment-1-4.jpeg

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                          • Naroth Kean
                            Naroth Kean last edited by

                            I was thinking of something like this 6.jpg

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Naroth Kean last edited by

                              @Naroth-Kean Thank you Naroth!

                              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                              • Kevin Longueil
                                Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

                                Trying to paint out my lines - work in progress - any comments or advice greatly appreciated 🙂 i guess i'm really wondering if i'm on the right track Attachment-1-5.jpeg

                                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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