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    Tight Deadline! New Book Project. Feedback Much Appreciated!

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      @MiaNova Yeah, I’m really liking it too. I’ll have to turn it into an actual font in my font program. Another thing to add to the list!

      @Robyn-Hepburn Another vote for the pencil font!
      P.S. Thanks!
      P.P.S. I know, it kinda does lol. I probably should fix that. XD

      The next pages! (Before & After) Any thoughts on these?
      (The font on the rendered spread is the favorite serif font from above. I still like it. Maybe I could try to do a pencil version of that and see how it looks?)
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      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        Before and after.
        The before sketch here, I actually turned into two spreads in the final draft. That’s why this before sketch is paired with another final render above too.

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        https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
        https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
        https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          Any goat lovers out there? I’m sure you can relate to this one!

          This spread wasn’t in the original storyline. It was added about halfway through the storyline work. My editors all agreed I needed to really push more of the highs and lows in the story. Hence the scene below. (Gotta love Nigerian Dwarfs!)

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          https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
          https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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          • Robyn Hepburn
            Robyn Hepburn @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            @Elizabeth-Rose 😂 The evil-goat-laugh!

            https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
            www.robynhepburn.com

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            • Chantal Goetheer
              Chantal Goetheer @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              @Elizabeth-Rose haha it makes me think of my brother's goats. Evil cute creatures. Preferably escape just before he has to go to work. Haha. I really loved that pencil traced font!! And it's so nice seeing the book develop bit by bit.

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                Next spread! Only got 3.5 hours sleep last night. I’m trying to finish up and submit this book by the end of today so it can be released on Mother’s Day. I’m going to need lots of homemade cappuccinos! Just got the Title page and the final spread to finish the drawing plus the coloring and another spread that’s done to color. I think it’s doable! Wish me Luck! (Or better yet, pray for me)

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                https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                • Robyn Hepburn
                  Robyn Hepburn @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  @Elizabeth-Rose Wow! Adrenaline and caffeine can be a dangerous combination. 😆 I really hope you manage to get it submitted - I'll be praying for energy and persistence. It's really beautiful and I love seeing how it's been developing! 🧡

                  https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
                  www.robynhepburn.com

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    I’m alive!

                    Thanks all for the prayers, they came through!

                    I ended up submitting the finished storybook on my buffer day, the day after my self-imposed deadline. Talk about cutting it close.

                    I had planned to stay up late and get it done before the buffer day, but lack of sleep always seem to hit me on the second day and I kept nodding off now matter how hard I tried. I even ate a bunch of dark chocolate.

                    But thank goodness my buffer day was a Thursday so the approval came back the next day and I was able to purchase my author copies!

                    Also I’m excited to announce my book tour dates! It’s gonna be short and sweet.

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                    The grand total of illustration hours the final week from Sunday to Thursday was 31 hours. And on top of that 5–6 hours for my day job and farm chores. No wonder I didn’t get any sleep.

                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                    • Robyn Hepburn
                      Robyn Hepburn @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      @Elizabeth-Rose Amazing! Many, many, many well dones! It looks beautiful! 😍

                      https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
                      www.robynhepburn.com

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                      • Jacob Norton
                        Jacob Norton @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @Elizabeth-Rose Looks wonderful! A perfect May book - my family is trying to keep our chickens out of the garden as we speak.
                        Seeing your whole process is great, and the final illustrations look wonderful - my daughters would be all over it!

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