Hi Guys, Lee, Jake, Will (me) are going to fix the SAME painting tomorrow in our How To Fix Your Art. We're all going to give our versions of the fixes we think will make the painting better. We won't collaborate so we'll get to see each others versions at the same time in the meeting. Please upload your images on this thread so we can choose one! Thank you!
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A bit old but I think it may be my best effort.
@Will-Terry Thank you Kevin! Hope to get a few more to choose from.
I would love input!
I'd love some direction on this one. 
This one could use some help... 
@Will-Terry. For the last assignment of Developing Great Visual Stories: 
Hi guys, would love some help. This is a folio piece from a couple of months back.
It would be awesome to get your fixes for this one! I think one of the problem for this one is the silhouettes and making the characters stand out better so the advice and fixes would mean much for me!
Here's a new one I'm working on for my portfolio. I would love it picked apart (I've flubbed the perspective on certain items).
This is one I've held off on putting in my portfolio because I'm not sure it's "there" yet. I'd love feedback!
I would love feedback! I’ve been fussing with the composition for awhile and feel like it’s just a bit rigid and static. I’d be grateful for any help! Thank you so much!!!
Hi Guys, Lee, Jake, Will (me) are going to fix the SAME painting tomorrow in our How To Fix Your Art. We're all going to give our versions of the fixes we think will make the painting better. We won't collaborate so we'll get to see each others versions at the same time in the meeting. Please upload your images on this thread so we can choose one! Thank you!
