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    Among these 3 illustrations, which one would have the best chances in a contest?

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    • Hector Sandoval
      Hector Sandoval last edited by

      Good afternoon, community. I want to participate in a contest where I need to submit an original illustration for a children's book, and I'm undecided among these three options. The prize might not be significant, but it involves the possibility of working with a major publisher in my country. I know I'm still a rookie in the world of illustration in general and especially in children's book illustration, but I'm 100% committed to my goal of becoming a children's book illustrator. Therefore, it would mean a lot to me to know your opinion on which of these options would have the best chances.

      Any insights would be greatly appreciated.😊

      the wooden leg.jpg

      qrious.jpg

      good boy.jpg

      https://tokkaido.com/
      https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
      https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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      • amandajoyhogan
        amandajoyhogan last edited by

        These are great! I would vote number 2 - it highlights your character design skills, and the fantasy environment you've created is really fun!

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        • Hector Sandoval
          Hector Sandoval @amandajoyhogan last edited by

          @amandajoyhogan thank you for your kind words. I'm really appreciate the response

          https://tokkaido.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
          https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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          • Johanna Kim
            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Hector Sandoval last edited by

            @Hector-Sandoval-OrmeƱo I vote for #2 and agree with @amandajoyhogan on the reasons why. Such fun illustrations! Good luck with the contest!

            http://www.johannakim.com
            http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Hector Sandoval last edited by

              Hola @Hector-Sandoval-OrmeƱo!

              I like option 2 the best because it has story, characters and background.

              If you have time, I have a few suggestions for your consideration and did a quick draw over.

              1. Consider adding foreground details.
              2. Consider adding more background, more than just the planet.
              3. Consider making the baby alien larger. I almost missed the little guy at first glance.
              4. Consider hand-written text or remove it entirely. I’m guessing you will write in Spanish. I didn’t quite understand the text, you might want to simplify. ā€œThe robot came across the most unique creatureā€.

              5A4280DF-E9A6-40C8-A25F-B973D1082754.jpeg

              https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
              https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
              https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
              https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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              • Hector Sandoval
                Hector Sandoval @Johanna Kim last edited by

                @Johanna-Kim I'm very grateful for the comments and good wishes 😊

                https://tokkaido.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
                https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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                • Hector Sandoval
                  Hector Sandoval @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                  @Jeremy-Ross I appreciate your comments and recommendations; I find them to be very accurate. Certainly, my English, especially in writing, is a bit limited. In my original concept of the story, the text is in rhyme, but its relevance in the contest is minimal, as it will only be used as a reference as stated in the contest guidelines. Apart from that, I consider your suggestions very valuable, and I will certainly take them into account. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

                  https://tokkaido.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
                  https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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                  • Dima Eichhorn
                    Dima Eichhorn @Hector Sandoval last edited by

                    @Hector-Sandoval-OrmeƱo I love all but I really really enjoy the first one! Good luck!

                    https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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                    • Hector Sandoval
                      Hector Sandoval @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                      @Jeremy-Ross I took all your wise recommendations, and made some changes I think improve my illustration a lot. I'm very grateful

                      find a rare animal SVS.jpg

                      https://tokkaido.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
                      https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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                      • Jeremy Ross
                        Jeremy Ross @Hector Sandoval last edited by

                        Nice work @Hector-Sandoval-OrmeƱo! Glad it helped.

                        Good luck on the competition!

                        https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                        https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
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