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    Assignment #3 - Developing Great Visual Stories

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    • skeletortoise
      skeletortoise last edited by

      Hi all!

      I have been stagnating on art for a little while, but I am hoping to finish up Will's class very soon. I only have this one illustation left.

      The word triple I'm working off of is Crocodile, Cook, Colossal.

      My idea is there is a crocodile in a kitchen trying to bake something, but he is so big in this tiny kitchen that he can't help but knock things over. I am having trouble figuring out a good angle though.

      Can someone give feedback on these thumbnails and possibly give ideas for how to shake things up? Thanks!

      PXL_20230829_221632526.jpg PXL_20230829_221634776.jpg PXL_20230829_221647560.MP.jpg PXL_20230829_221655322.jpg

      The angles here are all super similar, but I am having trouble figuring out a way to mix it up. Any notes would be greatly appreciated!

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      • srednaart
        srednaart @skeletortoise last edited by

        @skeletortoise This is really fun! I think if you brought the items in the room closer together, it could help making the room feel too cramped for the crocodile.

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        • skeletortoise
          skeletortoise @srednaart last edited by

          @srednaart Thanks for the input! 🙂

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