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    I’m over thinking “Flight”, HELP!

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    • ksfabian
      ksfabian last edited by

      I have thumbnail editing out way more ideas but narrowed it down to these three. Help me stop overthinking and get to work! IMG_1869.jpeg option one, a kid raising a baby griffin and it finally flies.

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      • ksfabian
        ksfabian @ksfabian last edited by

        @ksfabian IMG_1868.jpeg option 2, girl turns into a werebudgie (parakeet) when she eats millet bread.

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        • ksfabian
          ksfabian @ksfabian last edited by

          @ksfabian IMG_1867.jpeg or 3, cockatrice chasing down two kids saving eggs from being dinner.

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          • Robyn Hepburn
            Robyn Hepburn last edited by

            I had the same problem! So hard not to overthink.

            Here are my reactions to each of your ideas, in case that might help?

            • The millet one intrigued me: I'd like to see a werebudgie and I think that's a really fun concept. (though I'm not sure about the punchline - just my opinion, and I'm notoriously hard to amuse.)
            • With the cockatrice one, my first thought was: will it be clear that they're saving the eggs rather than stealing them?
            • The raising of a baby griffin made me smile, overwhelmed by the cuteness.

            I don't know if that helps in any way, but I hope you manage to make a choice and create something you're really happy with. 💛

            https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
            www.robynhepburn.com

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            • ksfabian
              ksfabian @Robyn Hepburn last edited by

              @Robyn-Hepburn thanks so much! I a definitely struggling to decide because I love them all. But other feedback I’ve gotten is to do the cockatrice one. But as a potential portfolio piece, it’s hard to not want to do a comic.

              ksfabiancreations.com

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                tom.barrett last edited by

                While they all have potential individually, I feel the cockatrice piece might fit the challenge better.

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