*Question* March 3rd Thurs Toxic Waste
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@bharris This looks great! One thing that pops out though is the numbers above the chalk board do not follow the perspective established in the rest of the piece - i think the high contrast of the white background behind the numbers makes it stand out a little more than it would otherwise too - looking forward to seeing the finished piece - great concept!
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Thanks Kevin! I'm testing out the posters and the colors. I don't want them to stand out too much of course!
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I can't wait to be done... lol. Still working on the light and border. I'm debating putting a back pack below the climbing girl, but I didn't know it it would get too cluttered.
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It looks absolutely fantastic @bharris ..you should be proud
Love it! I don't think it needs anything else going on, there's plenty already! And the lighting looks great. -
@Dulcie Thank you, and thanks for the feedback!
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@bharris Wow - this looks absolutely terrific! I think the time you spent on going through the color studies and implementing input on the laser eye lights etc was all time very well spent. I agree with @Dulcie that I don't think you need to add the back pack. I like how Haven is clearly isolated which makes her stand out. If you begin to add to much overlapping behind her she might get lost. I say you have already hit a home run here!
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@Rich-Green Thank you so much Rich, I really appreciate your comments! You're both right, it would be too much behind her.
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This is just GREAT! Really solid piece, the color and lighting are handle exquisitely! And the characters are so appealing! Really, really good work!
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@NoWayMe Thank you!
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DONE! I think, notice anything off?
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@bharris nailed the lighting, great job!
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Definitely unique idea! I love the characters. I know that my son, when he was young, would probably have loved to become a toxic waste super hero
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This is really fantastic. Well done!
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Oh I love it, so clever! The expressions are great and I love the layout and concept! Really well done!!!
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@Chip-Valecek Thank you! It finally came together.
@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen lol thanks! I came up with it in that state of almost sleep... Wasn't sure it was actually a good idea at the time though.
@Carrie and @Charlie-Eve-Ryan Thank you!
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This turned out so amazing! Great work @bharris. Their is so much story going on with each person that I keep circling around and around finding new gems. So good.
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Such a great concept!
There's so much interesting stuff going on in the image, but without making it look too cluttered. I really feel compelled to stay and look at all the stuff happening in there! -
This is nuts!
Ace
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I really enjoyed Will's critique for 3rd Thursday, an his changes would make a large improvement!
I'm curious though if this piece works as a vignette for my portfolio if I just change the girl's pink shirt? Or do you think I should make all the changes and improve the focal point? From my understanding he was pointing me more toward a spot which was the assignment, but I think it can work outside that.
Let me know your thoughts!
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@bharris I think it could work! ... but then again I had the exact same critique you had, so maybe I am not the best judge!
Jokes aside, I think your piece is really strong and while I am not sure I fully understand the concept of a vignette yet, I think it could work. And I was under the impression @will-terry thought that too.
This habit of wanting to include to much stuff in our illustrations is really hard to get rid of!
