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    Camomilla doodles, draws and sometimes swears

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    • Camomilla
      Camomilla last edited by

      After getting some much needed advice on perspective I've started with the basic lighting and colour scheme 😊

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      • Camomilla
        Camomilla last edited by

        And I've started painting. I don't really know much about colours, so I'm winging it šŸ˜› I know I'd like warm lights and cooler shadows - lamp-light has a tendency to be very yellow. And I'd like the red flowerpot to stand out. I think I need more grey on the shelf - it demands to much attention, and I think it's because of the warm colour. Hm.

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        • Camomilla
          Camomilla last edited by Camomilla

          And this is how it came out in the end šŸ™‚ Can't believe I'm at #Dailydoodle2016 no. 63 already! Wow!

          Things I'm happy with in this piece:
          • I like the concept - cats are unpredictable, and this could be a dangerous situation. I doesn't HAVE to be, but it could. I like the uncertainty.
          • I like the shading in the shadow part of her face. I also like her expression.
          • I like the cast shadow from the flowerpot
          • I like that I managed to get som fur texture on the cat
          • I think I succeeded in making the shelf and the things on it more saturated than the rest, making it feel closer to the viewer

          I'm not so happy with:
          • The cast shadow on the floor. I think the whole shading-area needs more definition somehow, but it just looked weird when I tried.
          • Her hair. It's too thick and chunky. It might as well belong to a lion šŸ˜›
          • The leg coming forward. In retrospect I should have discarded it.

          Mixed feelings about:
          • The lighting. I tried to give a warm light from the lamp and some cooler light from behind. Somewhat successful I think, but not quite there.
          • The plant. I would have liked it to pop more, but the leaves already look to healthy.

          I think it's good for me to evaluate my work, even when I consider it finished. Sometimes I go back and change it after a while, when I've learned more and feel more confident at how to fix my mistakes šŸ™‚

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          • Camomilla
            Camomilla last edited by

            Noticed some white on the flowerpot. It HAD to be fixed šŸ˜›

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            • Camomilla
              Camomilla last edited by

              I'm doing a commission 😮 OMG, this is so scary! I'm actually getting PAID to draw this, which is quite intimidating. She has the following requirements:

              I can choose theme, but the image must include three women (herself and her two nearly grown daughters).

              And that's it! After wrecking my brain trying to figure out something I thought SHE might like, I decided to make something I like myself. After all, she wanted me to make her this because she likes the other stuff I make. And I mostly like my own stuff. So her tastes are probably not that different from mine. If she, in the end, decides it's not for her, I would still have a piece I like myself šŸ™‚

              I've recently watched the recorded Creative Composition Class, and based on a lot of really, really bad thumbnails, this is what I decided to work with. No values as of yet, but it's coming šŸ™‚ Very, very rough linework too, but hopefully one can tell where this is going šŸ˜›

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              • Camomilla
                Camomilla last edited by

                I'm having trouble linking from my dropbox šŸ˜› Here it is uploaded to the forum-server:

                artflow_201603072213-small.jpg

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                • Camomilla
                  Camomilla last edited by

                  Tonights update. I decided the woman on the right had too much of an attitude and redrew her. I think this works better šŸ™‚ I've also started on a more finished sketch of the woman on the left šŸ™‚

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                  • Camomilla
                    Camomilla last edited by

                    Some more sketching. Not happy with this - this does not have enough attitude šŸ˜›

                    And I decided to split my image in three separate documents to keep file size lower. To get a break from the lousy character desigh, I decided to start working on the background.

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                    • Camomilla
                      Camomilla last edited by

                      So, not happy with the girls on the last sketch, I made some changes tonight. Much happier with toning down the detailed clothing, but I'm hesitant to start on the facial expressions. I'm not sure how I want them to read just yet šŸ˜›

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                      • Camomilla
                        Camomilla last edited by

                        I skipped a few updates on this - I've digitally inked it somewhat, and started blocking in light and the hard shadows. I'm really feeling this as I go along, so it's really time-consuming!

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