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    HTFYA She Stepped Carefully Through the Darkness… Fixed!

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    • Jeremy Ross
      Jeremy Ross last edited by

      Hi SVS Team.

      During the January HTFYA Critique, the guys @Jake-Parker and @AnthonyWheeler recommended that I add more lighting on the adjacent trees and it definitely looks much better! Thanks gents!

      Before HTFYA:
      IMG_1187.jpeg

      After HTFYA:
      IMG_1188.jpeg

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      • Sarah VanDam
        Sarah VanDam @Jeremy Ross last edited by

        @Jeremy-Ross Nice! That’s looking great! I love how graphic and shape-focused this is

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        • Avondrood-art
          Avondrood-art @Jeremy Ross last edited by

          @Jeremy-Ross Lovely!

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          • Mel F
            Mel F last edited by

            Nice one! Such a little fix but such a big difference I feel it makes 🙂

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Mel F last edited by

              Agree @Mel-F !!

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                @Jeremy-Ross looks great. i'd offer some suggestions though. The tree is taking up a massive amount of interest so maybe should be toned down and try to direct more focus to the character. I like the wolf being hidden and graphic, but i wonder if he can be enhanced somehow to be more interesting.

                Cool piece though!

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                • Larue
                  Larue @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                  @Jeremy-Ross
                  Amazing how that little added light really "places" your character there, nice!

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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @Larue last edited by

                    Thank you @Larue !

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