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    • kayleenartlover
      kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

      Should I make the changes Will drew and add color, or should I do a side-view spread? Would just making small fixes "bump up the score" for a more passing grade? Or would it need to be redrawn to get 100% on everything?

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      This is the original I submitted:
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      • fullofkk
        fullofkk last edited by

        Personally, from my understanding from listening to all of their critiques, simple is better over technical is better. But if you want to implement the original perspective and use both Will and Jake's critique, go for it. I love the idea of the first one and the new idea that you're sketching out. You can always do both if you want to see which one you personally like.

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        • Oana
          Oana @kayleenartlover last edited by

          @kayleenartlover Hi! I think that aiming for 100% improvement at each try is difficult and too much pressure. Trying one thing at a time and feeling gradual improvement is ok 🙂 When still working on the basics working on a difficult angle will make everithing more difficult, but I also like picking an idea that feels more fun! Also… I finally learned that starting over and over is not that bad, every time it wil be easier and better! And many thumbnail sketches at any point in the drawing you feel stuck, even for little parts of the drawing. Hope this helps!

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