Illustrating Children's books assignments

[Leontine]

assignment number 3

[Thrace]

@Fabienne Wow, thank you for all the advice but especially the draw overs they really help me see what I am doing and how to do it faster. It really helps when someone actually shows you on your own work. I am so glad to have this forum to do this!!!!

[Thrace]

@Leontine-Gaasenbeek Thanks, I will try and work on that. I love your illustration by the way!

[DanetteDraws]

@K-W wow, thanks so much for the in-depth critique & draw-over, that's super helpful! Now that I see my fox with your box (I'm a poet!) I can totally see the paw placement is off. I'll have to give the drawing through technique a go going forward.

Your revised squirrel is much better! Now he looks like he has defined legs and a bushy tail Your feet studies are great too! I'm sure it helped doing them.

@Karim-Benyagoub love your squirrel! Very awesome eye. I like how you put in the line depicting the top of the fence he's standing on too, it gives context with his little paws over the edge. One thing I'd point out is that his left arm seems like its too far forward/going across his centre line. I think the only thing you need to do to fix that would be to put in a little chest line from his chin down to the nuts to show that left arm as actually reaching around his body instead of growing out of his front.

@Fabienne love your mice and squirrels! I can see you did the same as me on the first assignment: once you got the 'simplified character' down, you couldn't help but then take it a step further with anthropomorphizing him I just love the pose of your 2nd mouse - she's got 'tude! Great storytelling.

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears good going with your foxes! I think your ears are just fine - pointy like a foxes' ears should be I got this same advice which I'll give you too - drawing through and doing a centre line would help. Your paw placement looks off on your left and middle ones and in places your form looks a little flat, so I think that would help you too. The top hat looks like its on his head on an angle because of brim placement - if he were wearing it proper the up-turn of the brim would be toward us and front and back would be the flat part of it (with the up-turn of the brim again on the side that's behind the hat). One more thing: I find it a bit strange that two of them have their tails straight up in the air. I think it would seem more fox-like if it hung down (like in the reference photo). I don't know if foxes wag their tails like dogs do, but for me, I think of the tail being up as more of a dog-like characteristic.

@Leontine-Gaasenbeek you have such a nice, soft feminine style! Your foxes are great, nice variety between the three characters. The one fox's head looks far too big though - the bottom one in your first image.

Also - your mouse image - sooo cute! and OUCH! That little crab is up to no good lol. The only thing that looks off to me is the feet - there's no way that left foot could anatomically face that direction. If you meant to make her in a pile-squat sort-of stance both feet would need to be angled since her hips are facing to the right rather than straight-on at us. Currently it looks as if her right foot is facing straight and her left foot is completely backwards, facing behind her. For storytelling purposes - I wonder if you can do something about her big ears? That is a defining characteristic of a mouse. Maybe there's little slits in her head-wrapped towel that they're poking out of, or coming out the top somehow dripping wet.

[Andrew Thomas]

Can't believe I missed out on this awesome thread for this long! Here's my first exercise:

Blocked out a silhouette of the real squirrel to get a general idea of what shapes I was working with under all that fur and detail.

Hoping to get one of these done everyday. Any feedback is much appreciated.

[Thrace]

@Andrew-Thomas Very cute! Great idea to do silhouette I am going to use that!!

[Karim Benyagoub]

@Everyone I'm enjoying looking at all your fun versions, so cool to see different characters created
@DanetteDraws thanks for the feedback, yeah I agree, the arms would need some more work, which I would do at some coloring step (I would also change the size of the nuts and probably use only one nut

Meanwhile, here are my three foxes-like furries, had a lot of fun doing them

[Leontine]

@DanetteDraws Thanks Danette, for your comments. I had some big ears but for this I thought it would be funny to hide them, but some bumps can be fun! The feet are ment to be comical aswell, If she has Charlie Chaplin feet and leans on her left hip, its no pproblem to pose like this. Maybe its best to turn the right foot a bit and make it shorter. Ill try some different angles.

[Fabienne]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears You're very welcome, Thrace.

[Naroth Kean]

OMG you guys got good stuffs going! love those characters much. This is great!

[Leontine]

@Karim-Benyagoub Love the tree so differtent characters. also your lining is very beautiful. chapeau!

[Thrace]

Do these ears look right? I don't know why ears are so difficult for me!?!

[Karim Benyagoub]

@Leontine-Gaasenbeek thank you Leontine, I like your characters too and I like also your delicate lines, soft and smooth ones

[Steve Young]

Not bad going,

[Leontine]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears HI Thrace! what a lovely mouse-girly! a view things for improvement: The left ear should be more to the front of the head. and the right arm is bending forwards, witch is anatomically not possible. Don't forget to place centerlines to help you whit placement of the face. Love the tipsy tail!

[Fabienne]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears That's a cute mouse! And I see you used the bean-shape and contrapposto very well.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Contrapposto

[Fabienne]

@Karim-Benyagoub I like your simplified shapes and lines. Looks very neat!
PS: I want that MEGALASER-Fox!

[Thrace]

@Leontine-Gaasenbeek Thanks for the help!! I will fix it.

[Thrace]

@Fabienne Thanks!

@Fabienne said:

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears That's a cute mouse! And I see you used the bean-shape and contrapposto very well.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Contrapposto

[Karim Benyagoub]

@Fabienne said:

@Karim-Benyagoub I like your simplified shapes and lines. Looks very neat!
PS: I want that MEGALASER-Fox!

Haha thanks @Fabienne, "we" will notify you if "we" ever launch a mega-lazer fox series on the market, hehe.
Btw your characters are very cool