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    Does Lucy look confident to you?

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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

      Hello all - tried to draw my character sketch of Lucy into a new pose - my questions are - does one or the other sketch look more like she is confident?.... the change is really only in her one raised eyebrow - seems to make a difference though - also does the sketch look like it could be the same girl (i know its rough) - anyways thank you for your help - i really appreciate it 🙂Line Up.jpeg

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      • KamiLyon
        KamiLyon last edited by

        I think the one is the middle solves your problem the most. The one with the raised eyebrow is a more of a questioning look I feel. (it's what I do when I look at someone crazy lol) I really like both of them.

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

          The middle is the best, i get the feeling like she is thinking "I got this!"


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          • Thrace
            Thrace @Kevin Longueil last edited by

            @Kevin-Longueil it definitely looks like the same girl, nice job Kevin! I too like the middle one for looking confident.

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            • evilrobot
              evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

              You did a great job on these. Nice work. Looking forward to seeing this months entry.

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @KamiLyon last edited by

                @KamiLyon @Thrace @Chip-Valecek thank you for the feedback! - very helpful - it looks like the middle drawing is the expression i should go with - You nailed it Chip - "I got this" is exactly what i was shooting for!
                @evilrobot Thanks Evilrobot! - my idea is that her face will be the main focal point - might end up being a weak composition but i'll give it a shot 🙂

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