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    Third Thursday April 2016 WIP

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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by smceccarelli

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      Thanks for all your input! - I chose the most favorite color scheme (number 4) and changed Lucy's proportions as Danette suggested.
      Now I need fresh eyes to look at it - I cannot watch it anymore... do you see anything that needs tweaking?
      I have done this entirely in ProCreate - a challenging project is my way to learn a new workflow, and this has certainly done its job! I will probably post a "first ProCreate experience" on my blog later next week.

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      • Lee Holland
        Lee Holland last edited by Lee Holland

        I think that looks great, The values and composition work really well. Great drawing

        https://www.facebook.com/pages/Lee-Holland-illustration/285517801577676?
        https://www.instagram.com/lee_holland_illustration/
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        • Suzy Heitz
          Suzy Heitz @smceccarelli last edited by

          @smceccarelli WOW! You've really got something special going here!

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Suzy Heitz last edited by

            @Suzy-Heitz Thank you! The more I look at it the more I see stuff that may or may not need fixing...calling a piece finished is always a struggle for me.

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            • Russ Van Dine
              Russ Van Dine last edited by

              I agree, this is special. I think the dino in the light needs a shadow. I like the splashes of color around the bottom right, could you do the same with the dins or their area? This is a real winner, congratulations.

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                @smceccarelli I think calling a piece finished is an artist struggle everyday! Looks great, tons of details. Well done!


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                • Lynn Larson
                  Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                  Oh, this is amazing!!! I second the hard shadow on the dino in the light, and a bit of rim lighting on the snouts of the closer dinos wouldn't hurt.

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                  https://twitter.com/lynnlarsonart

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Thanks for all the input - I have implemented almost all of it!
                    Sorry for the silly question, but how does it work with the challenge? We just turn up at the GoToMeeting and cross fingers that our work is one of the six selected, or do they get announced before? It will be at 5am in this part of the world...

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                    • Dulcie
                      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                      @smceccarelli Looking forward to seeing the finished piece! They don't announce anything beforehand, keeps the excitement for the 'live' class 🙂 It's 4am for me too but worth it...if you get to the classroom early there's banter and chat beforehand which I like because it feels like a real class that we're all attending 🙂 But if you can't make it, then the next day the recorded video goes on YouTube.

                      PS don't think I said hi before..welcome to the forum 🙂

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                        @Dulcie Hi there - so we are neighbors ;-)) Thanks for the explanation - I thought they might want to keep the thrill...I will post my final here in half an hour or so. It is kids bedtime here...;-) I will then get to bed early and try to get up in time.

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                        • smceccarelli
                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          This is the final I submitted today. I struggled a lot with the shadow of the dino in the light. If I plot the shadow correctly, it is barely visible, but I agree that it looks odd. If I add a cheated shadow, though, I lose the silouhette of the other dino. At the end I decided to leave it without shadow....good or bad I do not know. I took in all the other input, and it was definitely worth it.
                          As I did this illustration entirely with ProCreate, I could export the time-lapse, and I have made a video out of it where I discuss the differences between working with the iPad/ProCreate combination and working in Photoshop. I am horribly self-conscious hearing my voice....but well, I guess I have to get over it.

                          http://www.smceccarelli.com/illustration-with-the-ipadpro-and-procreate/

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