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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by Kevin Longueil

      @Kevin-Longueil "Friends will guide you to your next opportunity" reads the fortune - wondering if "friends" and "guide" are coming across in this version (these are the same characters from a drawing i did a while back called Finn and the Fiddler) Thank you for your help 🙂0_1462479087523_Attachment-1-41.jpeg

      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

        @Kevin-Longueil I think this works really well! Both the adventure aspect and the guiding are captured nicely, the composition is great (I love the way the trees are framing the subject, and the shape of the clouds in the background), values are supporting the focus point in an excellent way.

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          Nice work that's going to look fantastic.

          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

          https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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          • Dulcie
            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

            I agree with @smceccarelli ...I like your previous thumbs and overall agree with previous comments.. I really like the idea of using a ship/voyage to convey opportunity. To me this last thumb is the strongest, it really expresses the quote well and it's got lovely linework already 🙂

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            • Russ Van Dine
              Russ Van Dine last edited by

              this is coming along nicely!

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                @smceccarelli Thank you Simona! - i was hoping you would let me know if it improved or not 🙂
                @evilrobot Thank you William!
                @Dulcie Thank you for the feedback Dulcie - and congratulations! i just watched the Third thursday video - great job
                @Russ-Van-Dine Thank you Russ!

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                  Just sharing my progress 🙂 Working on the foreground and middle ground (without the figures present) - 3rd thursday is coming fast - looking forward to summer when i will have more time for drawing!- 0_1463166723979_Attachment-1-44 copy.jpg

                  Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                    @Kevin-Longueil It's looking great - wonderful textures on the bark!

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                      @smceccarelli Thank you Simona! - ( this is a bit off the subject but i love your Weit painting with the wasp - love his expression - you have created such a rich and wonderful world - very impressed)

                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        @Kevin-Longueil Thank you! One day I will write that book - but it will be a young adults book, and I do not trust my writing skills so far at the moment - better stick with drawing 😉

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                        • Lynn Larson
                          Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                          These are wonderful! Your trees have great movement, can't wait to see the added characters 🙂

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                          • Dan Tavis
                            Dan Tavis last edited by

                            Those trees in your last image are absolutely awesome!

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Lynn Larson last edited by

                              @Lynn-Larson @Dan-Tavis Thank you both! Great to get such encouragement!
                              Just started on the figures and the boat - still very sketchy - shrunk the boat down quite a bit which seems to give it a lonelier feeling - not sure if i like it better or not with the smaller boat - might go back to original size..... any opinions? Thanks again 🙂0_1463382911662_Attachment-1-47.jpeg

                              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                • evilrobot
                                  evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                  This is really turning into a masterpiece those trees look fantastic. You have so much story telling going on here it's really good.

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                                  • Kevin Longueil
                                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                                    @Damien-Rambacher Thank you Damien! - i went with the smaller boat - it really helped to get a second opinion so thanks again.
                                    @evilrobot Than you so much William! - such a huge compliment from someone i respect - really made my day 🙂

                                    Seems like i need another week or so for this - i feel like the things i did early in the piece are very rough now that i have worked on the two main figures - i think it will be a late night tonight - thank you everyone for your help and encouragement!0_1463536571818_Beard?.jpeg

                                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                    • Thrace
                                      Thrace last edited by

                                      Really nice piece! Great work,Kevin!!

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                                      • Kevin Longueil
                                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Thrace last edited by

                                        @Thrace thank you Thrace - just sent in my Drawing - good luck to you and everyone!0_1463557735049_Kevin Longueil 1100 pixels.jpg

                                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                        • natiwata
                                          natiwata SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by natiwata

                                          @Kevin-Longueil Wow!!! This is phenomenal. I am always amazed by your drawing skills Kevin. I really think that if you start illustrating YA novels especially, you'll start winning awards. Beautiful work.

                                          Nat Iwata
                                          www.iwataillustration.com

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                                          • Lynn Larson
                                            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                            A-maz-ing!! I really like the openness of the interpretation, could be landing in a new place with the boat going out, or could be going to the shore for the incoming ship...either way, new adventure awaits! Wonderful job Kevin! good luck!

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