14 Aug 2015, 16:10
Your style is so lovely to look at. I'm really digging your work!
In this piece, the tones are perfect, the wolf is perfect, and the little dog and sheep are perfect. Because all those things are perfect, I think Red may need a little work. She doen't look like you have really figured out what her reaction should be in this scene. The pose is really hurting you here. She's almost in a "T" pose where all the limbs are just straight and out to the side. I'd revisit her and figure out what she's really doing in this piece.
Again, just amazing work from you!
PS: my "Visual Storytelling" video is almost done and will release in Sept. It has a massive amount of information on how to design your work around a narrative.