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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

      @evilrobot Absolutely good point , thank you - I will re-work that character!

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      • Dulcie
        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

        I love these @smceccarelli - fantastic work already! Really imaginative and fun.

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        • Russ Van Dine
          Russ Van Dine last edited by

          love it, great characters

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            thuraya @smceccarelli last edited by

            @smceccarelli
            wow! just wow. but I wish that the lion was more.. liony? anyway hope to design great characters like that someday

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              thuraya @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli good luck!

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                And here is Lionel Blackmane...what do you think?
                I have made some small changes to the other fantasy characters and I am going to completely re-design Dorothy - she does not really fit with the others and her pose is stiff and unnatural.

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                  @smceccarelli all of your character work is so great! I just had a closer look around your website and your talents go far beyond what I had even realized! So good!!!

                  www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                    @smceccarelli This looks good - i have to say though that i really like the little fellow with the grog barrel - have you tried giving the original character a subtle muzzle of a lion and a lion''s tail? I think this might be worth a quick try - really nice line up you have here!

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                    • Russ Van Dine
                      Russ Van Dine last edited by

                      I love it, laughing...

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Rich Green last edited by

                        @Rich-Green Thank you Rich! I can only return the compliment - your work is great! Love the mixing of illustration and photographs, it is a cool idea!

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                        • smceccarelli
                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Much happier with this Dorothy. I think the four characters now fit well together - maybe not so sure about the relative sizes. I will let it rest for a while and then fix any further flaws and go to paint.
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                          • Dulcie
                            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                            @smceccarelli It's an amazing line up - love new Dorothy - the older one was beautifully drawn too, but I like the fact that this new one looks like a captain, more authoritative, and on a technical note love the folds in her dress!

                            The one thing that makes me look twice/wonder how it works, is the huge collar on her outfit - it looks like her hair would have to be tied up for it not to get in the way/fall over the collar, yet the way the hair is falling on her back, it doesn't look like it's tied back. I'm not sure exactly what it is that needs fixing...and this is really super nitpicky because it's absolutely great work! But I mention it in case it's helpful.

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                            • Chip Valecek
                              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                              Loving it, but I would change the name of Jack Scarecrow to something else. It is to close to Jack Sparrow even with the hat and all I think of Pirates of the Caribbean. If you had to come up with these concepts and present them to an art director I would assume they would turn it away due to being so close to the Disney character in my opinion.


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                              • Lee Holland
                                Lee Holland last edited by

                                Your characters look great. Love your line up.

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                                  thuraya @smceccarelli last edited by

                                  @smceccarelli
                                  really like the lion and Dorothy's design is fantastic! great work!

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                                  • smceccarelli
                                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                    Just a color/value sketch. Although I work as a designer, I find I have to force myself to apply design principles to illustration. This time I am going to really make a commitment to stick to a limited palette throughout the characters. I am also thinking of strong midday sunlight for the lighting scheme and a vague background gradient suggesting a beach/marine setting.

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                                    • Jodi Gregg
                                      Jodi Gregg @smceccarelli last edited by

                                      @smceccarelli This version of Dorothy has so much personality! I love that you are moving away from the traditional color schemes and pushing the nautical/beach colors. The update to the Lion is great too! I understand exactly who they are now!

                                      I'd suggest updating the scarecrow and tinman too. Maybe make the scarecrow's pose a little looser. He's maybe a more scatterbrained, forgetful kinda guy... maybe make him more frazzled or less put together (maybe literally falling apart?) Also, I'm losing the lit match on the tinman pose. Checking how the silhouette reads can help the pose be clearer. Maybe have the arm in the opposite direction so the tinman is looking directly at it.

                                      Overall, the pirate designs on these are fantastic and really unique! I really really look forward to seeing these progress!! Keep up the stellar work!

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                                      • ErikBurlefinger
                                        ErikBurlefinger last edited by

                                        Your work is really beautiful, continue please!

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                                        • smceccarelli
                                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Work in progress...I am experimenting with a new process. Still many many hours to go!

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                                          • Lisa M Griffin
                                            Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                                            really fun idea and twist.

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