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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

      Here is my updated Tin Man - i drew a heart tattoo on his hand and i really liked the idea - i gotten one "no vote" already for the ones on the shoulder and arm (the oak leaf and acorns) - there is something about them too though that i like ... but i'm at that point where i can't really see it clearly i think - still have things to do and fix (axe handle for instance) but any feedback/critique/opinion is always very much appreciated - thanks!0_1470551659155_Attachment-1-77.jpeg

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

        @Kevin-Longueil I like the idea but rather it be a rust spot in the shape of a heart since you really can't tattoo metal. If you leave it b&w it reads well. But going into color I would use rust.


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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Chip Valecek last edited by Kevin Longueil

          @Chip-Valecek Thank you for the feedback Chip! Good points for sure - it is not too far fetched though - etching and inking metal is easily done with acids or even just a burin - also patinas are very easy to do on metal (i have a BFA in sculpture 🙂 and you can get all kinds of cool colors on about any metal - not to argue the point though - just giving my reasoning - but i think the rust idea is great and kind of fits into the patina realm - i am going to stay black and white for a while ... i feel like i am finding my voice so to speak - maybe go with it until i feel pretty confident with and the add color back in - i really appreciate you taking the time to give feedback - it is very helpful to get your reactions 🙂

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          • Kevin Longueil
            Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

            Added a crow to the Scarecrow to show how un-scarey he is and add more to the story of the picture - also added more straw poking about here and there - i think i like the addition of the crow - i am going to keep these as busts.... not sure if that will disqualify me from Third Thursday consideration though ??? - but i am really enjoying making (and seriously struggling with) these ...... i see now i have to adjust the light on his right arm a little bit.... i always notice things that i was missing when i post them here 🙂

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            • Dulcie
              Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

              It's really coming along @Kevin-Longueil ...I especially like your scarecrow (including the crow! Beautiful brushwork..) - to me he really looks like a thinking man's scarecrow...very thoughtful. It makes me wonder, if he thinks of himself that he is missing some brains, that he must be very hard on himself (and others?). I don't know what you have decided about his personality in your version, that's just my thoughts when I see this 🙂

              I'm glad you are feeling like you're finding your voice...it does come across that you are getting into your stride right now, and that's great to see 🙂

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                @Dulcie Thank you so much for the kind words and feedback! - The book reminds me in a strange way of the oft quoted poem of Robert Frost's - "Mending Wall" where things are the opposite of what a quick reading would tell - the take away from the poem seems to be that "good fences make good neighbors" - but it is really the opposite...."Something there is that doesn't love a wall" (the implication being that Nature does not love a wall and why are we building them).... In The Wonderful Wizard of Oz it seems to me that the Scarecrow with no brain is the most thoughtful of the group - the Tin Man without a heart is the most caring - and the Cowardly Lion the most courageous ...... so i was trying to show the Scarecrow as looking almost scholarly - glad you are seeing it!....that was a long winded reply wasn't it - anyways i really value your input and appreciate you taking the time 🙂

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

                  Here is my Cowardly Lion with a small crown in his paws/hands 🙂0_1470856449321_Lion with Crown.jpeg

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                  • Lisa M Griffin
                    Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                    This really caught my attention, he reminds me of Beast... love as well how the crown seems to be lit from within, it makes a striking contrast.

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      You are really nailing the expressions.


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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                        @Lisa-M-Griffin Thank you for the feedback Lisa! - i was afraid folks would be put off by the use of symbolism instead of a story element - i'm glad the glow is coming across too .. that was fun to try to do 🙂

                        @Chip-Valecek Thank you Chip! I'm working on Dorothy now.... i'm trying to make her look rather ordinary bit with some kind of aura of calm confidence .... does that sound strange?... anyways it is a challenge for sure - Thank you for the support 🙂

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

                          Here is my Dorothy - nearly finished i think - i read "The wonderful Wizard of Oz" after the prompt was given - the circle on her forehead is my interpretation of the apotropaic mark put upon Dorothy's forehead at the beginning of the book - Ended up putting Toto in there as a bit of a cheat to help show who this is - feel a bit bad about that for some reason - but really she is just an ordinary girl with a blue and white gingham dress and a small black dog - really looking forward to seeing what everyone else has done this Thursday!

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                          • Kevin Longueil
                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                            Finished 🙂

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                            • evilrobot
                              evilrobot SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                              @Kevin-Longueil Great work! The scarecrow is my favorite.

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                              • audrey dowling
                                audrey dowling last edited by

                                that's great! I love the mood to it. My favorites are the scarecrow and the lion

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                                • Rich Green
                                  Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                                  Kevin this is really a fantastic take on the characters and also it has your unique signature and style written all over it in the best possible way. There is something so charming and yet haunting about each of them and I could easily see them as illustrations inside the book itself. Outstanding work here!

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                                  • Kevin Longueil
                                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                                    @evilrobot @audrey-dowling Thank you William and Audrey! - really appreciate the kind words! I think the Scarecrow and Lion stand out a bit too 🙂
                                    @Rich-Green Rich, i cannot tell you what a huge compliment it is to me to hear that the drawings are coming across as charming yet haunting! Thank you 🙂

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                                    • Lisa M Griffin
                                      Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                                      They look like artist studio portraits and make a great set. I used the book/stories as inspiration instead of the movie. Hoping I can stay up for it Thursday night to see/hear live. 😉

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                                      • Kevin Longueil
                                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                                        @Lisa-M-Griffin Thank you Lisa! I look forward to seeing your finished piece. I noticed your one eyed Wicked Witch with her umbrella and knew you were following the book too. Love your flying monkey!

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                                        • Lynn Larson
                                          Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                          • bows to the master * these are simply wonderful Kevin ❤

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                                          • Lisa M Griffin
                                            Lisa M Griffin last edited by

                                            Thanks Kevin.
                                            Like you mentioned with your artwork, mine has a few subtle nods to the book. It's good to hear that you recognized a few. 🙂

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