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    • DanetteDraws
      DanetteDraws last edited by

      @Leontine-Gaasenbeek This is so great - you are a rockstar at rendering! Love your colour palette and 'mood' of this piece.

      I feel like your snail is more a slug though - where's his shell? You just barely have a tangent with the end of his tongue and leash too.

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      • Jiří Kůs
        Jiří Kůs last edited by

        Great illustration, you did a really good job... one thing is bothering me though... instead of walking the snail/slug, she is posing for a photo. She is even showing off her ring 🙂

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        • Steve Young
          Steve Young last edited by

          Really well done, great colors 🙂

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          • Naroth Kean
            Naroth Kean last edited by

            It looks amazing. I really love the color. The characters are adorable. Well done!

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            • Leontine
              Leontine @Jiří Kůs last edited by

              @Jiří-Kůs Thats because at first it was a Characterdesign.

              Leontine
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              • Leontine
                Leontine @DanetteDraws last edited by

                @DanetteDraws Your right, it is a slug.

                Leontine
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                • Craig Babin
                  Craig Babin last edited by Craig Babin

                  I love your drawing and painting style. Great use of what looks to be a white wash over the distant trees, to give it that hazy depth of field look. Great work!

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                  • Peter Jarvis
                    Peter Jarvis @Leontine last edited by

                    @Leontine-Gaasenbeek I absolutely love the colours. The characters as gorgeous. I can see them having some great adventures. Awesome piece.

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                    • Leontine
                      Leontine @Peter Jarvis last edited by

                      @Peter-Jarvis thanks a lot!

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                      • Leontine
                        Leontine @Craig Babin last edited by

                        @Craig-Babin thank you so much!

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                        • Leontine
                          Leontine @Naroth Kean last edited by

                          @Naroth-Cow thank you very much!

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                          • Leontine
                            Leontine @Steve Young last edited by

                            @Steve-Young thanks Steve!

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                            • Javier Diaz
                              Javier Diaz last edited by

                              Looking good. I would probably bump up the contrast a bit. I feel like the highlights can be pushed a bit more.

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                              • Lee White
                                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                Beautiful piece! Very nice compostiion and really lovely attention to the details.

                                In my story telling video that's coming out in Sept, one of the key things I talk about is really thinking about how you want your audience to feel when you do a piece. Then catering to that feeling with your arsenal of tools and tricks to hit that feeling. This, to me, is a very magical piece. Your style is right on the money and as I mentioned before, your details are really nice. I think the only thing that could be used to improve it is the color and contrast. You need to up the "magic" and to me that means going with a warm/cool relationship. This will bring our foreground forward and push the trees in the background back some.

                                I did a quick paint over to show an example. Feel free to interpret as needed to make it work for you. : )
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                                • Leontine
                                  Leontine @Lee White last edited by

                                  @Lee-White Thank you very much for your effort Lee! I think It works out better this way!

                                  Leontine
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                                  • Ben Rudnicki142
                                    Ben Rudnicki142 last edited by

                                    Wow that looks great! I really like following your process on this and seeing how you did things. Great job.

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                                    • Leontine
                                      Leontine @Ben Rudnicki142 last edited by

                                      @Ben-Rudnicki142 Thank you so much Ben! have a nice day

                                      Leontine
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