Raven @ His Writing Desk (work in progress)
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@smceccarelli thank you. I'm going to hit the wall in the background above the desk and then see what other value adjustments I can do. I'll post the final. Also thank you for the course recommendation can't wait to watch it.
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@Sarah-LuAnn thank you. For being an extra set of eyes. It's cool how interaction with other artists who want to relate and come along side encourage and critique enhances the beauty of what is unseen then created for others to see. Life is really amazing and the more I learn about these principles in art the more I see them translate to everything. I going to try to apply all the replies when I get time and I'm excited to see a better piece than one done in social isolation! Yippy!!!! Haha! Yes!!!
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@mattramsey thanks !!! I'm cataloging the Intel and I'm going to go to town on this thing. I might just make bullet points and attack this thing like a rabid squirrel!
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Thank you @evilrobot !
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@Tyson Really liking this piece! - as Matt said it is creepy and interesting - nice mood - i would love to see this with a textured brush for the final rendering something with a bit of tooth to it - i will say that when i saw the original sketch for this painting it had the feel of a quick sketch done by one of the great masters to me - not sure why but that did pop into my head...there is something just right about it - also reminded me of Mark Andres work - very nice!
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@Kevin-Longueil thank u for the awesome compliment it is encouraging and the advice on the piece. Hopefully I will have time to finish this before to long I think I'm going to write down all the critiques from this post make a bullet point sheet and go to work on this. Hopefully I'll have time I have a teething baby and I'm running on coffee juggling a million ideas and to do's like a wind storm barreling through a redneck yard collection! I need to catch my breath.
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I took into account the posts and tried to fiddle with this piece. Here is an update this part of the learning curve is tuff but if a mans going to make he's got to be ruff.
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A slight warmer render >>>>>
Which one looks better? Thank U!
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@Tyson-Ranes The relatively cooler version has a better feel to it for me - they are both nice though!
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I think the cool light probably captures the mood better, if you're going for sad? Also, watch the perspective on that table! The left leg should be a little shorter than the right one.
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@Tyson-Ranes agree with @Kevin-Longueil
Nice work
