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    Children's Illustration-08 assignment with pig. Please critique :-0

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    • DanetteDraws
      DanetteDraws @MOO last edited by

      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Awesome! Your piggy is adorable!

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      • aska
        aska last edited by

        As i said it before, your art is fun!:)

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @DanetteDraws last edited by

          @DanetteDraws Thanks, Danette! Following those stick men gestures really helps 🙂 !

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

            @aska Thank you, Aska!

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • Laurie
              Laurie last edited by

              @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Great idea for poses - hadn't seen that yet and definitely makes it a universal technique for many a critter! Love how your pig turned out!

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Laurie last edited by

                @Laurie Thanks, Laurie. I kind of like him too 🙂

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • lmrush
                  lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Adorable

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @lmrush last edited by

                    @lmrush Thank you 🙂

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      Tyler Hallstrom last edited by

                      Fun pictures! I would say the subtle shadows underneath also add some nice dimension to the pigs. Keep it up!

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @Tyler Hallstrom last edited by

                        @Tyler-Hallstrom Thanks, Tyler!

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          linhb last edited by

                          your pig flowing in the air ?

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                            Kat SVS OG last edited by

                            Love these!!! I haven't done this as a homework assignment, but a few months ago I did a bunch of little piggies in different poses, too. They are just naturally so cute.

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                            • TessaW
                              TessaW @linhb last edited by

                              Oh, good idea, finishing the homework assignments. I think completing the exercises is so important if you want to retain more information from the course.

                              I think your did a great job! The pig is very cute. One critique I have is that I think the gesture of the bottom left pig would be better if it's head was thrown back, like the middle ones, except in side view.

                              And like @linhb pointed out, is the pig supposed to be above the ground plane? I think if your intention was to have the pig hovering in the air like it's leaping and dancing, you were very successful. If you wanted some of the poses to have at least one foot on the ground, the shadow needs to connect to whatever is touching the floor. The only one that does this is bottom center.

                              Let's see more completed homework assignments! I think it would be helpful to do another one of these gesture sheets with a different character that has a different shape.

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                                @TessW Thanks. Good points.

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG @linhb last edited by

                                  @linhb I guess so! 🙂 I should have made contact withthe feet and the shadow. 🙂

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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