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    • Maile McCarthy
      Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

      @Naroth-Cow OK, you win for concept, hands down. Hahah.

      I really like the Charlie in the second one and the three dancing wolves from the third. It's hard for me to see the whole image at once on my small screen, so I may not be getting the best read, as far as composition goes.

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      • Naroth Kean
        Naroth Kean last edited by

        Thanks guys, I do enjoy the concept myself haha. I need to spend more time on composition.

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        • Naroth Kean
          Naroth Kean last edited by

          In progress, still gotta fix a lot of stuffs. I'm gonna break for now and do something else, maybe something else new will come to mind.image.jpg

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          • Thrace
            Thrace last edited by

            OMG this is awesome!! I am so in amazed by your work, great job!

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            • Lynn Larson
              Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

              Beautiful colors!

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              • Maile McCarthy
                Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

                @Naroth-Cow I love how this is turning out -- the color and texture, and the expressions of the characters really bring your concept to life. I love the pig's drippy nose 😛

                I might suggest changing something about the rope binding the two foreground characters, so that it's not parallel to and flush with the bottom of the page. I think if you had it more askew, so that it got more cropped off on the pig side, we would still get the impression that they were bound together.

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                  @Maile-McCarthy I see what you mean there I'm going to change it a bit. I never had the rope in the first place then I added one, I guess I might not need it at all. Thank you for the advice!!!

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                  • ?
                    A Former User last edited by

                    Here my one more take on the piece.
                    feasting-on-red-and-pink.jpg

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                    • Lynn Larson
                      Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                      Oooh...they are going all out! Party flags and everything! Red looks so mad, i love it hehe!

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                      • Steve Young
                        Steve Young last edited by

                        Really great work!

                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                        • ?
                          A Former User last edited by

                          @Lynn-Larson @Steve-Young
                          Thanks guys I want to add some color to the flags but hopefully it's not to much of attention grabbing. Is it ok that we use 3rd Thursday piece for portfolio?

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                          • Thrace
                            Thrace @Guest last edited by

                            @Naroth-Kean yes, that's one of the objectives to make pieces for your portfolio.

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                            • Maile McCarthy
                              Maile McCarthy @Guest last edited by

                              @Naroth-Kean I'm loving this. The wolves' shadows read so much better now.

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                              • Rich Green
                                Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                                Looks so good @naroth-cow!

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                                • Naroth Kean
                                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                                  @Rich-Green Thanks a lot Rich!

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