Update: Treehouse WIP Witch one works better?

[Leontine]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen XD

[Leontine]

How about now... ?

[aska]

Its cool, but perhaphs consider puting the falling bottle a bit lower so it doesnt overlap with the house

[smithdraws]

@Leontine Wow there was even more to the story than I thought

[Leontine]

@aska I did, wait till you see the finished version!

[Leontine]

Please vote for your favorite entry:

[Chip Valecek]

I like the night version, great job on both. You should do all four seasons with it.

[ambiirae]

@leontine I really like them both but I think the day time one appeals to me more cause I can see the details better

[aska]

Both are great, but i think nite one speaks more to me;) its the atmosphere of loneliness plus bottles

[TessaW]

I like the night scene, but kind of want to see a bit more warmth and intensity cast on the man and house from the lantern. Really cool illustration!

[tombarrettillo]

wow! nice job. Hard to pick, but I lean toward the night scene. I would put the moon where the sun is in the daytime version. Also, back to my previous post, I still think you need either more boat showing behind the island (with some highlights to help define its shape), or to bring the boat to the front, especially in the nighttime version. As it is now, it is hard to see the boat. I might also add a couple motion lines to emphasize the bottle's movement downward. I like all the small details like the cat, laundry, etc. Very nice!

[NoWayMe]

I also like the night scene better in term of storytelling! I agree however that you need to push the lighting more (either warm light from the light you already have, or cool light from the moon which I would put as @tombarrettillo said where your sun is in the daytime version. I also agree that we need to see more boat.

Amazing work!

[Jose Ramos]

Very nice work Leontine!, I preffer the day version with those greenish and bluish.Love the texture.

[MOO]

I also like both but the night scene the most. Really nice work, Leontine!
Now, I just looked again. I think I would actually like something in the middle so that there is more contrast but still feels eveningish.

[WithLinesOfInk]

I love the night scene. I also love the idea someone mentioned of making it more early evening. I had some down time at work so I made some adjustments to see what could work. I apologize for the clunkiness- all I have an Photoshop 4.0 and a mouse at the job. Here are the changes I made:

Added a bit more depth to the top of the night sky
Threw in a kiss of lighter warmth towards the horizon where the sun just set
Upped the contrast all around
Lowered the value on the underside of the hill
Added reflected light from the lantern to the water and bottles

I really do love this piece, it's quite lovely.

I have the file with the layers in it, too, if you want me to email it to you so you can see my adjustments!

[Leontine]

@withlinesofink Thank you so much! Ive made some adjustments aswel but wait a view days to post, cause after a view days I have a fresh look. My e-mail is leontine@leontineillustrator.com