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    • Tyson Ranes
      Tyson Ranes @Chip Valecek last edited by

      @chip-valecek I like the (B) concept.

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      • bnewman
        bnewman @Chip Valecek last edited by

        @chip-valecek I like both, but the B concept has more focus for me. Perhaps he's getting ready to go to work? Shaving foam? Briefcase?

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        • TessaW
          TessaW last edited by

          Oooh tough one. I like @bnewman idea of shaving, because that seems like a more grown up thing do to. But I also like the idea of the interaction with the barista. Hmmm. Do both! But seriously, I think both are great and I can't decide. 😛

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          • Dennis Spaans
            Dennis Spaans last edited by

            I think A could be very interesting! Love to see what you would put on the shelves and counter 🙂

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG @Chip Valecek last edited by

              @chip-valecek I like B the best so far.

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              • tombarrettillo
                tombarrettillo last edited by

                "A" would offer more of a challenge. You could have the barista with a confused look on his face while handing the kid the coffee. Maybe add a few patrons for interest, also with confused looks.

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                • Jose Ramos
                  Jose Ramos last edited by

                  I think "B" is the best one, maybe if you add mom or dad opening the door with a surprise expression on the mirror could be great. 😉

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                  • WithLinesOfInk
                    WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                    I think B is a cute idea but something about A really grabs my attention. You could even have him problem-solving the issue- finding a way to to get more height. Also there's a lot of potential to practice perspective and drawing multiple things, and added more story in!

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      Looks to be a split on both... So I guess I will try to do both. I will see how my time is managed.


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                      • WithLinesOfInk
                        WithLinesOfInk @Chip Valecek last edited by

                        @chip-valecek How about a couple of variation on each, still rough.thumbnails, playing with composition and lighting and perspective? That can help me narrow things down sometimes.

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                        • Chip Valecek
                          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                          Lost track of time this month so I was only able to get one piece done and submitted.

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                          • evilrobot
                            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                            Nice one. I remember when I got caught doing this...lol.

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